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Reviews For Exceptions
* uses the big pleading eyes * I know you have a life, but: update, please? Please Please Please
This story is marvellous - literally. I'm marvelling at the concepts, the use of language, and the character interactions. It's intelligent and empathetic. Your combat scene was awesome - exciting and intense. Harry-as-thestral makes perfect sense. I *adore* this version of Snape, and his trademark snarkiness. All your characters have depth, and complexities. Great story. I'm wild with enthusiasm.
This story is marvellous - literally. I'm marvelling at the concepts, the use of language, and the character interactions. It's intelligent and empathetic. Your combat scene was awesome - exciting and intense. Harry-as-thestral makes perfect sense. I *adore* this version of Snape, and his trademark snarkiness. All your characters have depth, and complexities. Great story. I'm wild with enthusiasm.
On the offchange that the answer to the former is, "Yes:" PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, UPDATE! TAKE PITY ON ME! Give a junkie her fix! I need it, man! You know I'll be good for the review! It's just that, I can't find any errors right now. I swear I'll look harder next time! JUST GIMME THE ADJECTIVAL UPDATE!!! *whimpers* please...
finally found it story ive been looking for for absoulout ages hehe yea!!! whooo bout bloody time If you dont mind me saying lol um i guess I got nothing else to say all your storys are great. if you ever need any story ideas plots you can come to me Im full of them. Debs-the-potterfan@h...co.uk bye Admin edit: Jan - Please don't list your e-mail in a review. There's no protection on the site for it. Thanks. :)
I've been reading this story for a while now. I just wanted to tell you that I think it's absolutely awesome. You write REALLY well. I'm reviewing because I found this last paragraph especially poignant. I love the rest of this story so far, but that one line: "......Severus had to fight down the panic that rose inside him. Harry had become the son he'd never risked having, not when any child of his would have been pledged to the Dark Lord from the moment of its birth." I just... I don't know. It makes sense to me now, and that paragraph just felt so... I don't know. You're fabulous, though. I hope you keep writing this, even though HBP had been out for a while. I would love to see this finished. It's awesome. Really. |
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