|Title: Chapter 6: Shadowed Silence
||17 Dec 2005 7:58 pm
|Reviewer: Adrian (Anonymous)
Nice fic, I can't wait for more. I like how Harry's taken charge in this though I would like to have seen more about how his relationship with Severus developed.
Also, you refer to 'Jesus' several times. Haven't you noticed that no where in the books does any character do that? They go 'Merlin!' not 'Jesus!' You shouldn't assume that just because you believe in him others would. Don't superimpose your religion on top of characters who clearly don't believe in it.