| Title: When the Kicked Dog Bites Back
| 22 Jan 2024 6:49 pm
|
| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
The end came so fast! Thanks for your great story!
I like how protective Tobias gets and how he can sense the manipulation coming.
Your inclusion of a muggle with military training and strategy is brilliant! I love seeing how helpful it is in this world.
Great chapter! I loved seeing the trip through different peoples perspectives. Severus is a great big brother.
I’m liking this strong, scrappy (and kind of unscrupulous) Eileen. Very exciting plot!
This is gripping! What a cool cast of characters that have been thrown together.
Ah, what a cliffhanger! Snape’s offer was awesome. The chapter end sent shivers down my spine.
I’m so glad Tobias is seeing Eileen’s effect on Severus. He’s been so kind, stern, and levelheaded so far, but loses his compass around her. The scene with little Sev was heartbreaking.
Oh that did not just happen! Zing
Eileen is bad news. It’s heartwarming to see Tobias as a dad to his two youngsters.
|