Great chapter, can't wait to see what Severus decides to do, and what Harry decides to tell him. Keep up the great work, and please update soon. LES
| Title: Observation and Reflection
| 27 Jun 2007 2:43 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Nice start! At first the POV seemed weird because i'm not used to reading first person, but the style really works. It has more of a directness I find that I'm enjoying very much.
I liked Harry's apology, and how you ended the chapter was just right. A cliffhanger, but there's more to read. Hooray!
| Title: Forcing Confidences
| 27 Jun 2007 2:42 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Fantastic! I love Snape's voice and thoughts- the writing is wonderfully done! The tension, and discovery is just delicious. I loved it when Snape called him Harry. He seems so falsely alluring there. Lovely job. Thank you so much for deciding to share this with us! I hope there's an update soon!
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