Bet you thought I forgot about you, didn't you? :) I had to take a break from reading to finish my own chapter...but now I've got to get caught up so I can read your sequel! Aaaa!
Anyway, I really loved this chapter - everyone was so great. I loved how gentle, yet furious Dumbledore was at the same time. And how snape-like Snape was, though you could see his concern. Well done!
| Title: Epilogue: Restoration
| 26 Aug 2007 10:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Anne Squires (Anonymous)
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I just finished reading this story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Arg stupid idiot of a thing cut off my review - anyway I just wanted to mention that I am dying to know what Snape's reaction is (because I just know he was waiting anxiously beside Harry's bed the entire time he was out - or maybe that's just the fangirl in me XD) and hopefully I'll read about it at some point in the sequel, except I'll save it for when I've had a decent sleep and an injection of caffeine XD
You really are a very fantastic writer and I can't wait to read more.
I have rarely seen such an in-character Snape as yours. He's brilliant, snarky, controlled and quick to temper. You've done such a wonderful job with him. Thanks for writing such a great story; I look forward to reading the sequel.
Wow, fantastic ending! Though I was surprised that it was in Harry's POV (surprised but definately pleased
Oooh, cliffhanger. I know people hate cliffhangers, but I love them (even though the next chapter is like one click away, but whatever). I love how Snape is all like I'm-trying-to-pretend-I-hate-you-and-keep-my-reputation-intact-even-though-I-don't-really-hate-you-any-more-and-I'm-having-serious-doubts-about-whether-or-not-I've-ever-really-hated-you. Yeah. That was a really long run-on sentence, but it's about 3 o'clock in the morning here and I'm determined to finish reviewing this story XD
Author's Response: You are an absolute gem :-) I love you for reviewing every chapter. And your run-on sentence is about the best summary I've seen yet of Snape's feelings for Harry in my story, so don't apologize for it. :)
I knew Dumbledore had it in him to to make threats XD. And Snape! My new favourite character (well, not exactly a new favourite - more like a long-standing favourite that I am currently falling right back in love with XD)
The relationship between Severus and Dumbledore is so nicely detailed! I luff them XD
Yay, really good. I like how you've portrayed Dumbledore as a concerned old man/grandfather figure rather than the meddling old fool that a lot of authors seem to favour. Plus, the characterisation and details of the different relationships between Harry, Snape and Dumbledore is really quite something.
"I know what a car is, Potter, I am a wizard, not a troglodyte."
I just want you to know that that is probably the most perfect sentence I have ever read.
If there is one thing that Severus Snape definately can do, it is introduce a fangirl to a whole plethora of new vocabulary XD (and it inspires me to write long words, lol). You rock!
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