Wow. Just... wow. I've been reading this story non-stop since I discovered it last night. That was such a good read. Your analysis of Harry and his past, Ron and Hermione's characterization, Snape portrayed as a broken man but Harry forgiving him nonetheless... all of it. Thank you for sharing.
Just read this again and it's still sooooo good. Such realistic characterization without being completely frustrating and enough softness to soothe the more difficult moments.
Why did you do that?” Dumbledore asks in a very low voice. “That was my favorite picture of her. That was my only picture of her.” ok this made me cry. this is one of the most painful scenes i have ever read.
Wow. That was a really weird ending. It was a really weird story, though. Not in a bad way, I just think a lot of it went over my head. While I understood what was happening and the emotions and character of each person, I still feel like I was missing something. I did like that last little bit. A refrence to the Severus and Lily they had to obliviate?
Honestly, where did you get the idea for this fic? I mean the subtly, the philosophy and psychology. I may be so baffled because I don't have all the pieces and you went into this mostly knowing what you're doing (I don't want to be presumptuous, but most authors aren't 100% sure of where their story is going). Anyway, I'm just baffled at the complexity and strangeness of it. Well done.
Snape is not happy. Also, I don't blame him for chucking a book at Harry, my 8th grade social studies teacher threw a dictionary at a kid.
BRUH. The personalities you wrote were by far my favorite thing about this fic, the characters all felt so complicated and 3 dimensional. I’ve read so many fics where the moment Snape finds out about the Dursleys, he pretty much has a complete change of character. I don’t dislike those stories, but something like what you’ve done, where Snape struggles to change, feels so much more natural and I love it!
Title: Epilogue
| 28 Dec 2020 5:21 pm
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Wonderful ending thank you
Title: Chapter 26
| 28 Dec 2020 5:17 pm
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Thank you an excellent way to complete the story
Title: Chapter 25
| 28 Dec 2020 5:07 pm
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I don’t think Harry will ever trust an adult again!
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