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Reviews For Breathing his last
Title: Breathing his last 05 Jul 2007 11:21 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked the way that you opened this story, with Ron speaking about the Chudley Cannons. Nice style.

    I really liked all the family-ness. How Harry has his closest friends living in the house with him to make it feel like a home, how Percy came back to his family. It's really sad that Bill decided not to have any children. :(

    I really liked the letter, and Snape's reaction to it was very in character. Great ending. Thank you for sharing it!

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