Need more! Please finish!
Any chance you'll ever finish this?
| Title: Chapter 14
| 15 Nov 2016 10:00 pm
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| Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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- a marvellous story.
It feels like being at the school , your grip on athmosphere , glances,
sulkiness, and the studying is riveting.
I so want to kick Sirius, and tell him to take up boxing in the Room of Requir'to let off aggression,
hug Harry, and get Sev to take his inner grief in earnest, the sensitive boy needs one on one with an attentive adult, Harry needs to be held and weep.- he's seen Ron and Herms and Nev for pity's sake, tell Lupin to relax a smidgeon, and play cards with his gang, after homework is done, and they have bathed in the sun. Aren't they allowed outside at all?
update, please, write more,'cause it is too good to leave hanging...
i think that spinnet needs a major reality check. not all deatheaters were slytherin.
I find the background somewhat confusing but I guess Harry is feeling pretty tossed around and confused too
LOVE IT! Orginial story and fantastically well written! Can't wait for more.
This is a terrific story. I almost didn't read it since, frankly, the jokey title seemed lame, but once I started I was hooked. It's well written, and avoids most of the cliches deaging and do-over fics are prone to. I'm dying to read more!
I love the ending. Sirius in Hufflepuff. It sounds like he found that even worse than being in Slytherin.
I have no idea why I have never read this before, but I'm glad I took the time to read it. My favorite line from this chapter was "Don't be ridiculous" It's such a Lupin response. I had another line from another chapter but I don't remember it. Anyway good job, can't wait for more!
PS: Glad to see you writing again too. :D
Author's Response: Thank you! This story is really fun to write. Look for an update either this week or next. :-)
This is great! I'm enjoying trying to figure out what's happening with everyone. I like your characterizations of Remus and Sirius -- both flawed, but still likable.
Author's Response: Thanks! I try to give all characters their own problems to deal with so that they don't just exist for Harry (which I think is a big flaw in many stories: characters around Harry seem to have no interests other than to be... well, around Harry). Of course, writing from a single point of view (Harry's) sometimes makes it tricky to show everyone else's motivations.
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