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Title: The Peach, the Apple, and the Blackberry 18 Jan 2024 6:55 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was fun! I like how Snape treated them both equally and had their personalities pegged. The tale was so humorously typical of a fable, where you’re trying to figure it out afterwards!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you enjoyed it! Honestly... I don't remember this story... at all... it's been a minute. Lol. I'm going to have to refresh my own memory. I'm just afraid to do that. My writing has changed significantly in a decade. Lol. Anyway.. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, and that Acceptance made you curious about other things I've written. <3 

Title: The Peach, the Apple, and the Blackberry 09 Jun 2011 7:23 pm
Reviewer: 1sunfun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice story.
    CCAP

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: The Peach, the Apple, and the Blackberry 21 Feb 2010 9:41 pm
Reviewer: grugster (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the way you write Severus! This story was amazing! Thanks for writing it!

    Author's Response: Thanks! He's one of my favorite characters. Thanks for your review!
Title: The Peach, the Apple, and the Blackberry 27 May 2009 1:54 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, Sev really put them in their place. I really enjoyed this!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    I thought it was rather funny that Draco and Harry even imagined they were getting away without a detention. Silly boys.

    Thanks for reading!

Title: The Peach, the Apple, and the Blackberry 19 Oct 2008 7:05 am
Reviewer: terumi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    snape usually give out punishments

    Author's Response:

    Snape could never forget to give out punishments to Harry and Draco, no less.

    Thanks for the review!

Title: The Peach, the Apple, and the Blackberry 26 Feb 2008 5:29 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a very cool story, I loved it, especially the glimpse into Sev's past and the way he handled the two boys. he actually has excellent child rearing skills.

    I may take you up on your challenge if I can think of a suitable fable.

    And if you like Sev as a father type of fics check mine out, and no it isn't the usual Severitus fic at all.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    I really do hope you take me up on the challenge. I'd love to read it. There's a good website that has a lot of Aesop's fables if you need some ideas: http://www.aesopfables.com/

    I'll look into your stories!

    Thanks for the review!

Title: The Peach, the Apple, and the Blackberry 16 Nov 2007 6:47 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought that this was very cute! I liked seeing all three characters in such a position: Snape attempting to discipline them after a fight and healing their scrapes. I also liked the way he did it by telling a story. I liked how Draco was serious and fessed up without adding, or twisting the story to suit him. It was nice to see him contrite and honest for a change. ;) I liked the way the one-shot ended with Snape 'surprising' them with detention. Hehe. Good job and thanks for sharing it!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it and that you reviewed. And in all honesty there was no way Snape would have let them leave without detention. :) I wasn't sure what to do with Draco at first in all honesty. He's not a character I write well or even enjoy writing about a lot, but I'm glad you liked the way I portrayed him. I always saw Snape as the ultimate Slytherin, so he would know all the trick his little Slytherins would use and be prepared to counteract them if necessary.

    Thank you so so so sosososo much for the review!

Title: The Peach, the Apple, and the Blackberry 06 Oct 2007 9:21 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Tiffany,

    This story was very cute! ^_^ I think you did a very good job on everyone's reactions, they sound alot like what the characters would say. I have never heard of that fable, but I think that it was a good choice for a story, so good job! I'll now read you're other story.

    much love,

    Beth

    Author's Response:

    Beth,

    Thank you. Personally I think the characters are more in character in this story than in my other one. The particular fable I used is not very well know but when I read it I got the idea for this little story so...*shrugs* Hope you enjoy my other story just as much.

    lots of love

    Tiff

Title: The Peach, the Apple, and the Blackberry 01 Aug 2007 7:38 pm
Reviewer: delaine (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very cool. i enjoyed it a lot.

    Author's Response: Thanks
Title: The Peach, the Apple, and the Blackberry 01 Aug 2007 5:35 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story! For a minute there, I thought Snape was going to forget about the punishment part but then at the last minute he gave them detention.

    Author's Response: Thanks. Snape would never forget to give a dentention.

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