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Reviews For Into the Labyrinth
Title: Chapter 11 06 Jun 2011 9:25 pm
Reviewer: 1sunfun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice story.
    CCAP
Title: Chapter 11 24 Sep 2008 5:40 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Really happy you updated! I'm curious about what went down with the D.A. and what Snape has planned. Can't wait until you post the next chapter :)

    By the way; what type of spell are you looking for? Anything specific? (curse, defensive spell, yada-yada...)

    P.S. Someone should call an exterminator on that giant pick toad ;D lol
Title: Chapter 11 22 Sep 2008 3:22 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i'm glad you are back, i was beginning to think you had given up on it and pleased that you havn't, just one minor thing wrong, you spelt azkaban wrong, check your spelling in future chapters

    Author's Response: I had a feeling I spelled a few things wrong. I was just in a hurry to let people know that i was still alive. Dont worry, I'll be  back to my perfectionist self in no time. Never fear, obsession is here!  (dont steal my theme)
Title: Chapter 11 20 Sep 2008 11:13 pm
Reviewer: kela (Anonymous) [Report This]
    UPDATE RIGTH NOW~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    THIS IS REALLY GOOD!!

    This should be a featured story!!

    Author's Response: I WILL TRY!! Oh, thank you! I'm glad you like my story!
Title: Chapter 11 20 Sep 2008 3:14 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh rats, it was so short....or was there some missing between Harry asking Sirius what his Patronus was and Snape's POV?

    Author's Response:

    Next chapter will be a lot longer. I just had to put something up so people would know I was still here.

    TAKE THE CHALLENGE!!!

Title: Chapter 10 20 Sep 2008 3:13 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I have not forgotten about this story, but I did place it out of my mind for a while, lol. I'm so glad you updated, yay you!
Title: Chapter 10 22 May 2008 3:46 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting fic, very well written i am so glad that severus was there to guide harry through the maze of corridors and harry quizzing severus under veriterserum was amusing, i wonder who severus followed, my guess would be voldemort as he has to be seen to trust him, i hope severus finds out what umbridge is up to
Title: Chapter 10 23 Jan 2008 2:25 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    YES! Another great chapter, it was very good. I'm SO glad you updated! PLEASE post agian soon! I'm very curious as to what'll happen next. hehe, Harry made me luagh when he was talking with his mouth full ^_^ he sounded silly.
Title: Chapter 10 23 Jan 2008 2:09 am
Reviewer: Tigress93 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm still happy to beta. You should be able to get my email out of my profile.

    Okay, nice chapter! You've got a bit of suspense going now, (not that you didn't before, but...it's back!) which is nice. Too bad about Dumbledore. I was hoping he'd stick around a bit.

    I like the way you have characterized Sirius. It's very believeable that he would jump down Snape's throat at the first mention of detention. His comment about not being able to cook was also a nice details. Small things that add interest to your story.

    The only critique I have is that the kids seemed a bit...meek, around Umbridge. You might have made them give in just a bit too easily. These are mostly Gryffindors, and I can't see them just turning their friend in, just like that.

    I'm glad you got over your writer's block, because this is (another) great chapter. Waiting for your next update. Feel free to email me when you want me to beta.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you new beta!

     

    Yeah, they didnt give him up that easily. Stubbern Gryffindors,....anyway, you'll find out about the fall of the DA in later chapters. =D

Title: Chapter 10 22 Jan 2008 6:17 pm
Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) [Report This]
    I've been waiting for this story to be updated. Great chapter! :) I noticed this story not long ago and I just couldn't stop reading. I love your Snape and your Harry, they are very cannon. Keep up the great work :)

    Author's Response: Canon! Woo! thank you. I'm glad people like my story. =D

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