Excellent story. I would have loved to have seen them have this scene.
| Title: One More Such Victory
| 19 May 2010 2:47 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I have just read this for the fourth time, and I still love it. The story leaves a bittersweet taste at the end. Just enough to fill you and make you think, but not enough to satisfy you and finish it all. The perfect ending.
| Title: One More Such Victory
| 12 May 2010 3:08 am
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| Reviewer: elsa (Signed)
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Oh, that was really lovely.
Oh this is just lovely. Thank you for writing it!
| Title: One More Such Victory
| 06 Aug 2009 2:34 am
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| Reviewer: CapeBretonNewfoundlander (Anonymous)
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Perhaps I am a sentimental prat but this short story has really touched me. Perhaps you have given the fitting end for Snape that I would have liked to seen in the book, DH although Harry does make sure that all those in the Great Hall knew that Snape was loyal to Dumbledore to the very last.
Thank you for this amazing story.
Very well done. I like this a lot. It kind of bothered me that she just left the pieces of the Stone 'lost' in the Forest like that in canon. The Wand wasn't the only Hallows that needed hiding.
| Title: One More Such Victory
| 17 Jan 2009 11:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Pearl Took (Anonymous)
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A wonderful, wonderful story. Harry and Severus are both in character too.
Thank you, this was a beautiful and inspiring read. And if I may so, improves considerably on the canon.
I very, very rarely write reviews here, but this piece was just so excellent. It's perfect and heartwarming and heartbreaking all in 1000 words. :)
| Title: One More Such Victory
| 26 Jul 2008 4:55 am
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| Reviewer: Kela (Anonymous)
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This was perfect, completely needed
beautiful really
10/10
you kept it soo perfect not awkward just lovely
Oh, I love this story, simply love it. What a wonderful thing to imagine.
You did it very well. I shall "favorite" this.
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