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Reviews For My Son
Title: Chapter 1 20 Jan 2016 10:45 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely start to the story
Title: Chapter 1 18 Jan 2016 4:08 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice first chapter. I like your Severus. Though I wonder if he weren't so focused on Harry, if he would have gotten some kind of revenge against the Dursleys. I'm glad he is still calling Harry by that name occasionally. I've always found stories where Harry has another name to be kind of confusing. I wonder how Harry came up with Rys?

    Author's Response: "Rys" was the only part of "Harry's" that the toddler could pronounce. His relatives tended to scream his name at him, which is why Harry isn't too fond of it. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 15 Jan 2016 3:05 am
Reviewer: Kierana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you for continuing this lovely story. Today of all days, I needed this. :~(

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 21 May 2009 1:42 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, this is lovely. Your story was recommended at Lily's Charm Yahoo group and I thought I would give it a try. Baby Harry is gorgeous, and the young Severus is trying so hard to be a good and loving father. And succeeding.

    I do have one question and this worried me throughout the chapter. But I must be especially thick as no one else has asked this question in all your other reviews. What is 'Rys'in toddlerese? I cannot work it out, I am afraid. Severus didn't even have to think what it meant. I can't turn Harry, or boy, or even freak into Rys. Please put me out of my misery.

    I was surprised that the woman from child protection was there and would allow anyone to buy a child. I thought the whole 'adoption' would have been done secretly and illegally. I am sure that selling children is not legal in Britain. But apart from this, it is lovely to see the development of the relationship between father and son. It is so heart-rendiing to see just how much Harry craves affection that he would take to a perfect stranger so quickly. But he is being offered affection and kindness, something the little boy has never experienced, that he can remember anyway.

    Did James know that HArry wasn't his. It is also sad that the man who died to protect HArry has now been totally obliterated and I doubt Sev will make any kind of point to mention him. He did say something about 'your other daddy', but I suppose that will be the first and the last time that Sev talks about James to HArry.

    On to chapter 2.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response: "Rys" was the only part of "Harry's" that the toddler could pronounce. His relatives tended to scream his name at him, which is why Harry isn't too fond of it. Private adoptions often involve fees, which in the early 1980s were not regulated - at least in America, not too sure about Britain. A CPS worker would have just been there to witness the exchange and sign off on it, and didn't know how much 'fee' changed hands. James did know and is talked about through the story. Thank you for reading.
Title: Chapter 1 21 May 2009 4:08 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    This is amazing! I love the emotion and the sweet baby moments between Severus and Harry. I am such a sucker for baby fics. I hope things work out between them!

    -P.G..
Title: Chapter 1 12 May 2009 7:48 pm
Reviewer: IchigoMirai (Signed) [Report This]
    this is really good! can't wait to read what happens next!
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jan 2008 2:36 pm
Reviewer: constance (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Can you please put in Eileen prince Snape in the 3rd chapter.
    I like Severus’ mum a lot
Title: Chapter 1 21 Jan 2008 3:14 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this fic made me laugh and cry, this is so well written, snape is a great dad to harry and what the dursleys put harry through is a discrace to humans, can't wait to read more of this story
Title: Chapter 1 17 Jan 2008 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I love this! Please continue, it's so great!
    I love Sev and Harry, they're just so sweet together.
    Wonderful story, thanks so much!
    -Elise
Title: Chapter 1 08 Nov 2007 4:04 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, I have to say that I just discovered your stories, and I love them! "Memories Returned" is wonderful, and this one is off to a great start, too.

    I love how determined Severus is to have his son with him--nothing is going to stop him from having Harry with him. And thank goodness after the way the Dursleys have treated him.

    There were so many wonderful little moments between the two--Harry's first bath, first toy, his delight in having someone who loves him...all brought a lump to my throat.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

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