| Title: Chapter 2
| 20 Jan 2016 11:03 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Sad but so sweet thank you!
I like that Severus has gotten help for Harry from his new neighbors. It will be good for Harry to have another child to play with as he becomes more confident. I noticed that you used the phrase 'reigned in his anger' several times. It should be 'reined in his anger.'
Sev has a difficult road to hoe. I am glad to see the traces of annoyance in Severus, otherwise he would have been totally unrecognisable as the snarky potions master.
poor little Harry. What hell his life must have been with the Dursleys. Is Severus going to have a friend in Phillip Mays, I wonder?
I take it your Albus Dumbledore is going to be as evil as Voldemort in his own way. I am not a fan of evil and manipulative Dumbledore, but we shall see what you ahve done with him.
Lesley~
Oh no, I knew this was too good to last! I love that you've got the neighbors trying to help Snape and Rys and I really, really hope that Dumbledore doesn't succeed in taking Harry away because I might cry if he has to go back.
-P.G.
Great job, please continue!
I'm really enjoying this story. It took me three days to read it (lack of time... *Shakes head*) but I keep coming back to it when I get home from work.
I like that you're keeping Harry/Rys's difficult memories simple. At that age he would have very few, and what ones he did have would be harsh. Now that he's in Severus's care, I can only imagine that most of that will dissolve soon. Little little kids are so easy to bounce back.
Can't wait for more!
Wonderful story! I enjoy your work and I can't wait to read more of this. I do hope that you haven't abandoned Memories Returned. It is one of my favorites and I think I have read it about five times. Keep up the good work!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 29 Jan 2008 8:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Jonathan (Anonymous)
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It's interesting. Please continue to write more since I'd like to know what happens next.
Best regards,
Jon
| Title: Chapter 2
| 29 Jan 2008 8:56 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Poor wee Rys...hope the Dursleys get in some sort of trouble. Love this Snape. Hope Dumbledore isn't an ass.
so cool... I love this parental Severus. i can't believe that Dumbledore could possibly think that sending a child to live with an AUNT is better or safer than living with his FATHER...what a dork! Go Severus! I also hope that Harry puts the fear of magic into him for interfering in his life making him live those mean selfish people.
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