Title: Chapter 3
| 20 Jan 2016 1:32 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow what an ending thank you
Thanks for explaining how Harry came to call himself 'Rys.' That makes sense. So now Dumbledore knows about Harry. It was just a matter of time. Looking forward to finding out where they went.
OMG, he doesn't know where he's going? That's insane! Why is Dumbledore so against this? Why won't he even hear Severus out when it comes to the well-being of Harry? I am very annoyed with him right now.
I am really enjoying your story. The writing is very good and descriptive, the emotions are sharp, and the plot is fast-paced, but not so fast that we can't appreciate the little moments between Sev and Harry. This is so good!
-P.G.
Wow! Great way to show how powerful little Harry--oops--"Rys" IS!
wow.
what happened to the dogs name? you seemed to have changed it.
good luck with the rest of the story
Author's Response: Fixed - my appologies.
Title: Chapter 3
| 15 Jun 2008 9:31 am
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Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous)
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wow - great plot, great characterisation! love "rys" and young severus - love the strong plot. also love the meaty updates! more pls!
Author's Response: Thank you!
yay for rhy sending dumbledore away and i hope that they will get to somewhere nice via the portkey and now the truth is known what plans will dumbledore come up with next
Title: Chapter 3
| 13 Jun 2008 6:57 pm
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Reviewer: Potterworm (Anonymous)
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Wow. Tbis is an amazing story.
Title: Chapter 3
| 13 Jun 2008 4:23 am
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Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Wow, what excitement! Go Rys.
Title: Chapter 3
| 12 Jun 2008 11:48 pm
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Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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One word: Update.
Oh! Don't forget to update your Memories Returned too!! ;-)
Love 'em all!
Yours, Lady Julie Snape.
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