Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For My Son
Title: Chapter 7 22 Jan 2016 4:40 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Good. Severus is finding more of the staff who are concerned with Rys. Looking forward to finding out who else will be allies.
Title: Chapter 7 21 Jan 2016 10:00 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very interesting twist!
Title: Chapter 7 12 Jan 2011 3:28 am
Reviewer: Leanne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope you will update soon. Love little Harry "Rys" and Severus is endearing, I would love to see if he's going to be a the meanest teacher at Hogwarts or not as evil but still tough.

    Author's Response:

    I am actually working on chapter 14 - but I just can't get the chapters loaded at this site.  You can read there here http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=22818 

    Thank you! 

Title: Chapter 7 11 Jan 2011 12:09 pm
Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please contiue the story soon, I love your story and the way Snape is still Snape but lessoned. I find it beautiful.

    And now intrigue is added into the story.
    My only main dislike is that Dumbledore is far more insinsitive than what he seems to be. But then Severus view is a little more scewed I think in regards to how evil people can be. So I don't really know if Dumbledore is as bad as Severus is seeing him to be.
    I don't like "evil" Dumbledore stories but he was kind of callous, in regards for the greater good.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much - although I see Dumbledore as a stratigist who has a war to win for 'the greater good' and who will do what he needs to do to keep his carefully made plans on track.

    I can't seem to load chapters on this site correctly, so I have completed up to Part 11, but until I figure out the problem, they are loaded at my other archives.

     

     

Title: Chapter 7 07 Dec 2009 8:35 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely adore this fic so far, you've written all of the characters so well and even though I've seen some despicable Dumbledore's, yours is so menacing because of his iciness; even when he knows he may have miscalculated his head is solely on rectifying his plans not an abused two year old.
    I love Bernard by the way, he's so slytherin but seems so loyal as well, life'd be much easier with our own Bernards around ^^
    As for Sev and Harry (Rys), very very gorgeous. Sev doesnt lose his character despite being a brilliant father and Rys is just huggable ^-^
    I hope someday you're able to write more of this, I'd love to see McGonagall going head to head with Dumbles (though you'd no doubt set the scene a little more delicately than a brawl between the two of them ^^)

    Author's Response: I've already started on the next part!  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 7 18 Aug 2009 6:52 am
Reviewer: Chetari (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it. Please continue as soon as possible. You're doing a great job.
Title: Chapter 7 18 Aug 2009 12:08 am
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 7 07 Aug 2009 7:32 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    excellent!
Title: Chapter 7 07 Aug 2009 5:56 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter...especially the end with Minerva going over to Severus' side.
Title: Chapter 7 07 Aug 2009 4:22 am
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so loving this story! I like how you do try to show Severus as a young man - so many fics seem to have Alan Rickman in mind (I adore him, also but...) - their Snape's are older and mature. Many seem to forget that canon Snape would have been 19 or so when Harry was born - your Snape still has that young feel to him. He would have been 21, 22 during this story, and he shows it at times!

    Of course baby Rys is just adorable!!

    I look forward to new chapters as you can provide them!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you - I have two additional chapters posted but can get them to load up here -


Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5