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Reviews For My Son
Author's Response: I am actually working on chapter 14 - but I just can't get the chapters loaded at this site. You can read there here http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=22818 Thank you!
And now intrigue is added into the story. My only main dislike is that Dumbledore is far more insinsitive than what he seems to be. But then Severus view is a little more scewed I think in regards to how evil people can be. So I don't really know if Dumbledore is as bad as Severus is seeing him to be. I don't like "evil" Dumbledore stories but he was kind of callous, in regards for the greater good. Author's Response: Thank you so much - although I see Dumbledore as a stratigist who has a war to win for 'the greater good' and who will do what he needs to do to keep his carefully made plans on track. I can't seem to load chapters on this site correctly, so I have completed up to Part 11, but until I figure out the problem, they are loaded at my other archives.
I love Bernard by the way, he's so slytherin but seems so loyal as well, life'd be much easier with our own Bernards around ^^ As for Sev and Harry (Rys), very very gorgeous. Sev doesnt lose his character despite being a brilliant father and Rys is just huggable ^-^ I hope someday you're able to write more of this, I'd love to see McGonagall going head to head with Dumbles (though you'd no doubt set the scene a little more delicately than a brawl between the two of them ^^) Author's Response: I've already started on the next part! Thank you!
Of course baby Rys is just adorable!! I look forward to new chapters as you can provide them! Author's Response: Thank you - I have two additional chapters posted but can get them to load up here - |
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