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Title: Chapter 2 18 Jan 2016 4:30 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that Severus has gotten help for Harry from his new neighbors. It will be good for Harry to have another child to play with as he becomes more confident. I noticed that you used the phrase 'reigned in his anger' several times. It should be 'reined in his anger.'
Title: Chapter 1 18 Jan 2016 4:08 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice first chapter. I like your Severus. Though I wonder if he weren't so focused on Harry, if he would have gotten some kind of revenge against the Dursleys. I'm glad he is still calling Harry by that name occasionally. I've always found stories where Harry has another name to be kind of confusing. I wonder how Harry came up with Rys?

    Author's Response: "Rys" was the only part of "Harry's" that the toddler could pronounce. His relatives tended to scream his name at him, which is why Harry isn't too fond of it. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you!
Title: Chapter 16 17 Jan 2016 3:07 pm
Reviewer: kakashi (Signed) [Report This]
    finally! You are continuing this wonderful great story!
    Thank you so much.
    I really love it. As always wonderful written. I hope you will update soon again!
Title: Chapter 16 15 Jan 2016 1:19 pm
Reviewer: Sophie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please please post more
Title: Chapter 1 15 Jan 2016 3:05 am
Reviewer: Kierana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you for continuing this lovely story. Today of all days, I needed this. :~(

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 8 16 Jun 2012 10:58 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    I've reread this and am again eager to read more. Makes me wonder, are you OK? It's been a very long time since the last update--I hope you're just busy with Real Life...

    Author's Response: I am unable to load on this site for some reason - I post on hpfandom and am up to chapter 14
Title: Chapter 7 12 Jan 2011 3:28 am
Reviewer: Leanne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope you will update soon. Love little Harry "Rys" and Severus is endearing, I would love to see if he's going to be a the meanest teacher at Hogwarts or not as evil but still tough.

    Author's Response:

    I am actually working on chapter 14 - but I just can't get the chapters loaded at this site.  You can read there here http://www.hpfandom.net/eff/viewstory.php?sid=22818 

    Thank you! 

Title: Chapter 7 11 Jan 2011 12:09 pm
Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please contiue the story soon, I love your story and the way Snape is still Snape but lessoned. I find it beautiful.

    And now intrigue is added into the story.
    My only main dislike is that Dumbledore is far more insinsitive than what he seems to be. But then Severus view is a little more scewed I think in regards to how evil people can be. So I don't really know if Dumbledore is as bad as Severus is seeing him to be.
    I don't like "evil" Dumbledore stories but he was kind of callous, in regards for the greater good.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much - although I see Dumbledore as a stratigist who has a war to win for 'the greater good' and who will do what he needs to do to keep his carefully made plans on track.

    I can't seem to load chapters on this site correctly, so I have completed up to Part 11, but until I figure out the problem, they are loaded at my other archives.

     

     

Title: Chapter 7 07 Dec 2009 8:35 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely adore this fic so far, you've written all of the characters so well and even though I've seen some despicable Dumbledore's, yours is so menacing because of his iciness; even when he knows he may have miscalculated his head is solely on rectifying his plans not an abused two year old.
    I love Bernard by the way, he's so slytherin but seems so loyal as well, life'd be much easier with our own Bernards around ^^
    As for Sev and Harry (Rys), very very gorgeous. Sev doesnt lose his character despite being a brilliant father and Rys is just huggable ^-^
    I hope someday you're able to write more of this, I'd love to see McGonagall going head to head with Dumbles (though you'd no doubt set the scene a little more delicately than a brawl between the two of them ^^)

    Author's Response: I've already started on the next part!  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 7 18 Aug 2009 6:52 am
Reviewer: Chetari (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it. Please continue as soon as possible. You're doing a great job.

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