this is really good! can't wait to read what happens next!
Excellent! I love this story. I like this Severus who so clearly loves Harry. Very different from canon, of course, but this is totally believable since Severus knows Harry is his son and openly loved Lily. It is very exciting to see Severus cope with a manipulative Dumbledore and other enemies.
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| Title: Chapter 6
| 11 Mar 2009 1:06 am
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| Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous)
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wonderful as always. i just love this story! update soon.
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Excellent chapter! I love your Severus. It's so nice to see him being Rys' Daddy and still the powerful, intelligent and Slytherin potions master we all love. I look forward to the next chapter with anticipation.
Dancingkatz
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Nice original take on the whole Severitis story. I'll have to read it from the beginning. I'm looking forward to the next chapter as well.
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I'm really enjoying this story, please continue soon, I have to know how this ends!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 15 Nov 2008 11:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Amy (Anonymous)
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This story is fantastic! I'm sitting in the dark in my room, having stayed up late to read this =] I can't wait to read the next chapter - keep up the good work =]
Damn, this is good! Keep writing--please!
Wow! Great way to show how powerful little Harry--oops--"Rys" IS!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 11 Sep 2008 12:43 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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Good chapter. Your Severus is very soft and loving to Harry, but that's very believable because of the circumstances that you've brought to the story. To offset his softness, though, you've got lots of harshness in other characters like Malfoy and even the very manipulative Dumbledore, so it makes for a very good and interesting story.
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