Title: Chapter 4
| 24 Jul 2008 1:34 am
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Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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Great job on this chapter - I loved the way you described Rys washing the unicorn in a cauldron; very childlike.
I sometimes hate Dumbledore (I disliked him in the books as well).
Poor kid took a bad case of the infant measles.
Looking forward to more.
that was great poor severus and rys may have to flee again, i hope dumbledore doesn't find out
Oh, thanks for updating again! I really enjoyed the chapter. The descriptions were beautiful.
Poor Severus...he's trying so hard to keep Rhys safe and it seemed that they had found a safe home again, but now that's compromised, too. Of course, there wasn't much choice. I could certainly understand Severus' desperation at Rhys' illness and the need to get help. I only hope he can figure something out now.
Dumbledore certainly is being very mysterious, and I can't wait to see what he's going to do next. I hope he won't be able to take Rhys from Severus. That would just kill them both.
Severus is such an awesome daddy, too! He may be cool and stern with most people, but he is so warm and loving toward Rhys. I just love how they interact. They really need each other.
Looking forward to more!
wow.
what happened to the dogs name? you seemed to have changed it.
good luck with the rest of the story
Author's Response: Fixed - my appologies.
Title: Chapter 3
| 15 Jun 2008 9:31 am
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Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous)
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wow - great plot, great characterisation! love "rys" and young severus - love the strong plot. also love the meaty updates! more pls!
Author's Response: Thank you!
yay for rhy sending dumbledore away and i hope that they will get to somewhere nice via the portkey and now the truth is known what plans will dumbledore come up with next
Title: Chapter 3
| 13 Jun 2008 6:57 pm
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Reviewer: Potterworm (Anonymous)
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Wow. Tbis is an amazing story.
Title: Chapter 3
| 13 Jun 2008 4:23 am
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Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Wow, what excitement! Go Rys.
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