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Reviews For Cry
Wow! What a great start to your story! In the past, I didn't like reading fics where Harry gets sorted into Slytherin. It's stories like yours that made me change my mind :) It's so sad though. The other students harassing Harry and Snape caring for him only because of his long lost love Lily. I hope it gets better for Harry and Severus starts to see him more for himself.
1 - Protective!Snape (my favorite!!!) 2 - Powerful!Harry (another favorite! Wish we could've seen more of this) 3 - Draco & Hermione - Dramionarry is something I LOVE so I love stories where the 3 of them are friends 4 - Snily (Down with James Potter!!!!!) 5 - The plot takes place in the canon timeline BUT is not a canon regurgitation. I can not tell you how many stories I've read that have taken place 1st-7th year and the fic is a direct copy, plotwise, to the books, including chunks of dialog directly copied from the book into the fic!!! Sure in this story the kids went into the Forbidden Forest and went to the stone in the end BUT what happened in the forest and with the stone played out much differently than in the book. Besides, all the other canon stuff was skipped or just mentioned after the fact (troll in the dungeon, Harry's bucking broom, Harry finding the Mirror of Erised, etc.) I'm not sure what your review naysayers were talking about there in regards to the canon plot. I thought you did a great job with working within the confines of what happened 1st year while developing an interesting and original plot. If you ever decide to pick up this series again, I would certainly read it! Thanks for writing!
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