This is one amazing story! Your ideas are wonderful and awesome. This is what I like in a Severus father story: Severus isn't truly Harry's father but in a way becomes his father, and not a huge change in appearance for Harry. It makes it more plausable and realistic, so you did a great job! You've got a great, emotional, funny, excieting, interesting story here, never abandon it. PLEASE update soon! It'd make me the happiest person ever.
Title: Cry X
| 09 Jan 2008 1:06 am
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Reviewer: Lio Saoirse (Anonymous)
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ohhhh, more stuff happening!! love sevy in this very good dad and like the new trio!
Lio
Nice I loved it. It is completely different from what I have read yet and let me tell you, it's brilliant though I never thought that Sirius would be shown in bad colour.
Good chapter. Narcissa is an interesting, but mysterious character. Hope you can update again soon!
Very interesting change of canon events.
Title: Cry IX
| 07 Jan 2008 3:51 pm
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Reviewer: Mistress Vamp (Anonymous)
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Oh hell. Nice freaking twist at the end! ::MV::
Title: Cry IX
| 06 Jan 2008 2:30 pm
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Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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Wow!!! That was just plain brilliant!!! I so loved it, update, update, update!!
"Draco and Hermione watched him with"...? Was something supposed to finish that sentance? Also, would Hermione really be able to cast an invisibility charm on herself at 11 years old? Other than that, this was a good chapter and I am really curious to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing those out to me. They are now fixed. I love that you are enjoying the story. Keep reading and reviewing please! - Fat
Title: Cry VIII
| 03 Jan 2008 5:39 am
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Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Finally! Some relief for Harry at last! I finally caught up with numberous updates.
I am curious about the interaction with Narcissa and Severus... could there be chemestry there? The new trio is a nice twist as well. I hope you add more soon.
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