Such a shame this was never finished.
Awwww. This looks like it could have been fun :(
Please write more? For Alan Rickman?
I love these kinds of stories! And yours is so well written! Can't wait for updates!
Title: Chapter 2
| 05 Oct 2013 2:14 pm
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Reviewer: Mungdori (Anonymous)
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Nice! Any more great stories like this? Please continue this, too! It's really awesome, and I couldn't bear to have this story abandoned!
Title: Chapter 2
| 04 Oct 2013 6:38 am
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Reviewer: Syrine (Anonymous)
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Please do not abandon this story. I like it, although I wish Snape could be more gentle. Like, not with the spanking, but his actions. The spanking is great, but like, could Snape comfort Harry a bit? I know from experience that I would have needed someone with a soft disposition after I got such a spanking.
Please finish this story. Pretty please. With a cherry on top with a milkshake with chocolate sauce and rainbow sprinkles and whip cream. Sorry I'm hungry and I want to finish reading this I don't normally beg.
Please oh please finish this story. I am getting really interested in it.
Hmm....I do hope Severus will go into more detail in regards to the rules and just what he expects from young Harry. Particularly in regards to his school grades, behaviour towards classmates and professors. He should also perhaps introduce good study habits with his new ward...teach him; (a) how read latin; (b) to be able to write better with a quill; (c) wizard history and traditions; (d) how to behave and act like a gentleman and not as he believes Harry to be a spoilt brat!
I do wonder just how long it will take before Severus truly realises that all is not well in regards to his charges mental/emotional well-being? Will Severus endeavour to form any type of relationship with his ward...so that in the event of trouble that Harry will turn to him? Will Severus ever reveal to his ward that he knew his mother?
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