| Title: Chapter 4
| 18 Dec 2007 3:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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Thanks for the new chapter. I hope you'll be able to update soon.
Love it, Love it, Love it, Love it! Brillient my friend. It was great and cn't wait for more. I loved what Umbitch said to Snape about Harry. What will be Snapes reaction? Will Harry spend time in azkaban? Remember the headmaster is not their to stop her and she does have free reign of the school by the ministry. I wonder what will happen, this is going to well for you not to update everyday. So update soon!
-Potions
| Title: Chapter 4
| 18 Dec 2007 1:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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Okay despite the chapter's lack of length, you maanged it pretty well. Now, you left a cliffy, that wasn't good of you. -pouts- Waiting for the next chapter.
Good chapter! I am very interested in seeing what will happen next!
Update! I loved it bunches one of the very best and slightly peeved when I didn't think of it. Wonder whats going to happen when Ron's family and Hermione find out what Ron asked of Harry. For once a story I hope I don't have to wait on to be updated because the author is telling me when they are going to update. I love it very much so far and you have totally ensnared me to want to read more so update.
-Potions
| Title: Chapter 3
| 16 Dec 2007 2:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Just_A_Reader (Anonymous)
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Awesome concept! XD I don't know who I pity more at the moment: Harry or Snape. ;)
Hope you'll update very soon. ^^
I like your story! Snape seems very in-character. I love X-mas fics!
Yes! Another marvelous chapter. This one was quite amusing, I love Harry and Snape banter, their exchange of thoughts and words is very funny to read. I find myslef either smirking or forcing myslef not to laugh out loud suddenly so people don't stare. Can't possibly wiat for the next chapter, post it soon please!
Good job with a necessary chapter. I'll be interested in whether Hermione figures things out, or stays mad at Harry.
Based on DH, Snape can fly without a broom, so maybe you should change this line: "“And I can fly just by flapping my arms about."
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