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Reviews For Come What May
Well that happened.
Great story. :) I really liked having Draco in it - I think it tends to flesh out the story quite a bit. Sirius was well written - not too extreme, and more mature than JK made him, I think. Tonks was fun as well. And I liked Ron being more willing to change his outlook! That made a refreshing change. Well done, and I'll look for the sequel! :) Tabbycatx Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it, ^_^
-P.G. Author's Response: Thank you so much! It makes me excited that you like it so! :D
Author's Response: Your name seems familer, you might have found me on fanfiction . net. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I don't get reviews from the early chapters a lot any more. :D
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
I know Harry was wrong to look into Snape's Pensieve...I'm not trying to make excuses for him. It was just wrong. But I've also always thought that Severus pretty much did the same thing to Harry. He may not have actually sneaked into a Pensieve, but he did violate Harry's mind and steal looks into Harry's private thoughts as well. I'm sure Severus would excuse himself by saying that Harry had to learn Occlumency and be strong, that Voldemort wouldn't show any mercy, but that's really just a cop-out, I think. First, saying that Voldemort wouldn't show mercy is true, but then again, Severus isn't Voldemort and he's expected to be a better person. He is a better person and so he shouldn't excuse his own actions just by saying that Voldemort would do the same, if that makes any sense. Secondly, though Harry does need to learn Occlumency, it's obvious that Severus' method isn't working. I owuld think that at least in the beginning some level of trust would be beneficial and Severus is not only not attempting to build any trust, he's actively discouraging it by his own actions. The truth of the matter, IMHO anyway, is that Severus relishes his chances to humiliate and hurt Harry. Now, two wrongs don't make a right, and it is still inexcusable that Harry looked into the Pensieve without permission. But I do think that Severus ought to also see and admit that he was wrong, too. But please, please don't take my comments as criticism of your story, because I didn't mean it that way. Just sharing my views of the situation (whether you wanted to hear all that or not, lol) because I truly enjoy discussing the characters and events and hearing people's opinions. In my own stories, I love the reviews that do that, and sometimes make me think about things I might not have and consider what I feel and where I'm going with the story. It is a brilliant start and I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: I don't mind hearing peoples thoughts. It was nice to look at that sitouation from someones elses perspective and I agree that Harry was wrong with doing what he did. I think he has realised that what he did was wrong and that he had better make it up too Snape. His future depends on it. I did not take any critism from your review. I enjoyed reading it, thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks, older Harry's had a bad life and I think that would have an effect on his attitude. Glad you liked it! |
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