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Title: Chapter 3: Lesson in Privacy 30 Aug 2023 2:42 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape knows how to get even! Terrific chapter
Title: Chapter 3: Lesson in Privacy 25 Apr 2020 5:35 pm
Reviewer: NoK (Signed) [Report This]
    Good fic
Title: Chapter 3: Lesson in Privacy 07 Feb 2017 7:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very clever idea and very well written thank you
Title: Chapter 3: Lesson in Privacy 17 Mar 2009 12:30 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh goodness, that is horrible. Poor Harry--the memories are only going to get worse. All in all, this has been pretty good so far, though you do have a few minor typos here and there that could use fixing. I'm loving the story!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3: Lesson in Privacy 29 Jun 2008 12:01 am
Reviewer: VampireOfTheLibrary (Signed) [Report This]
    Rreally like it!

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 3: Lesson in Privacy 29 Jun 2008 12:01 am
Reviewer: VampireOfTheLibrary (Signed) [Report This]
    There is an extra long space that could be fixed. The breakers change after this chapter. You might want to fix thast as well. Good chappie!

    Author's Response: I'll do that, thanks.
Title: Chapter 3: Lesson in Privacy 02 Jun 2008 7:44 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, wow...poor Harry indeed! I feel so horrible for him, having his memories displayed for the whole class, and it sounds like worse is to come. I think this seems especially horrible to me because I am essentially a very private person and have to feel comfortable with them before letting my guard down. I hope Severus will see that Harry is sincere and will resume Occlumency. I know right now that Harry is concerned with getting Severus' forgiveness (and rightly so since he knows that Sirius' life and other lives depend on him learning Occlumency), but I have to say that if I were Harry, I'd have a hard time forgiving Severus. But I guess Harry isn't really thinking about forgiving...he just needs Severus to work with him. I wonder, will that change and they eventually become close? I hope so, but I also hope that Severus feels some intense remorse.

    I loved how Harry and the others bested Umbridge, but I'm not sure she's gone for good. She's probably just regrouping. And you know, if students are justified to rebel against abusive professors, maybe they'd be justified in rebelling against Severus, too. But probably emotional abuse doesn't count, hmm?

    It was a fabulous chapter, very well-written! Looking forward to the next one!

    Author's Response: Yes, there is more, much more. Hope your response to what's coming won't be the same as others, (wince). I'm afraid it seems I have been very mean to Harry. I think emotionasl abuse does count as somethingthgat could get Severus in trouble. Now though, the students have seen someone a lot worse then Snape. Snape never made them cut lines into their own hands. That's just sadistic and she needs to be punished. Severus spits out hurtfull words and most of the school may hate him but I think Umbridge is worse by far. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 3: Lesson in Privacy 18 Mar 2008 5:51 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww man!! You're evil!

    Author's Response: I'll take that as a complimite, :P
Title: Chapter 3: Lesson in Privacy 20 Feb 2008 10:46 am
Reviewer: Grimmjaw (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That's it. This fic is the most brilliant one I've ever read. The scene with Umbridge and a younger Dudley had me smiling. I love it when authors show Harry a little more quick-witted. Too often he's portrayed as average, but the book has hinted the few times where he coerces and carefully insults others that he would survive well.
    I was laughing and fearing for Harry when the first memory appeared. I actually cringed at the offering of an apology--Harry hanging his cousin upside down unprovoked, laughing, taunting and threatening him. It's rather unfortunate that Harry did so well in making his potion acceptable.
    I'm obsessing over the next chapter already. Please update soon. I'd like to see the class' reaction to Harry's sorting, or his trip to getting his wand, the revealing of the brother wand, and Harry's potential for greatness. But I've read the books enough, I'm much more interested in seeing new memories. Oh! Harry with Sirius at Grimmauld...update!

    Author's Response:

    Your so sweet! Thank you so much, when I read the first sentence, (Thats it) I was momentairly worried! :) I'm so glad you liked it!

    A lot of the thing you want to see are in the next chapter! So I hope you enjoy!

Title: Chapter 3: Lesson in Privacy 12 Feb 2008 5:09 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah! Another chapter, I'm so happy to have discovered it. It was quite entertaining and interesting, can't wait for the next chapter! Your potion was cool, an awsome idea, how'd you come up with it?

    Hmmm, memories. how about these:

    First year: When the Dursley house is raining Hogwarts letters. When Harry meets Hagrid. When Harry meets Ron and Hermione. The zoo scene where the snake gets free.

    Second year: When Snape 'dueld' Lockheart and sent the doof flying. When Ron and Harry are in the Whomping Willow leading up to them going to Snape's office. The Chamber of Secrets. Ron and Harry's trip/drive to Hogwarts. The confrontation in Florish and Blots so everyone can see Lucius setting Ginny up with Riddle's diary.

    Third year: Aunt Marge geing 'blown up'. The dementor attack. Lupin turning into a werewolf. Harry chucking snowballs at Draco. Care of Magical creatures lesson where Buckbeak gives Draco what's comming. Hermione punching Draco.

    Fourth year: Harry and Ron sulking at the Yule Ball. Harry retrieving both Ron and Gabriel from the Black Lake. The Grave Yard scene. Barty Crouch Jr. being interogated after changing back.

    Fifth year: Umbridge's detention, so her cruelty is revield to Snape and she can get kicked out of Hogwarts.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for so many memory ideas Beth!

    I will certainly be using some of them. :D

    I’m glad you liked my potion. I really like the fics where Harry's memories are revealed to people. It’s very interesting to see there responses.

    I've only read like three fics where this happens and only two or three people see the memories. I decided to be really mean to Harry and reveal them to a whole class of his friends and enemies. I can’t wait to write there responses even though I’m not sure what will happen, Lol. J

    Thanks again for reviewing!

    Scorpia


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