Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving
| 30 Aug 2023 2:53 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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So awesome! I love how Harry’s experiences were laid bare, because now no one can doubt him. Maybe it’ll make some Slytherins and others rethink their futures, and it will give everyone a more rounded perspective on Harry. Amazing plot twist!
I read this outloud to my sisters and we loved it. There were important scenes unimportant scenes. Shit cut off in the middle leaving questions and concerns. It was perfect.
I read this outloud to my sisters and we loved it. There were important scenes unimportant scenes. Shit cut off in the middle leaving questions and concerns. It was perfect.
Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving
| 07 Feb 2017 8:56 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well done a wonderful chapter thank you
Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving
| 30 Mar 2014 7:18 pm
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Reviewer: mysinger (Signed)
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Magnificent chapter! I wish this had been in OOTP. Very well written.
Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving
| 21 Mar 2009 6:53 pm
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I think it's fantastic. Can't wait to read how the other students react later!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Wow, I really liked the memory sequence here, though I think Harry has just inadvertently given fodder to the Slytherins. Maybe some will be kind enough not to use it against him though, especially after seeing Harry being kind to the firstie.
You know, your writing is really good, but you almost always misspell the word Slytherin, which makes me wonder if your computer is changing it on accident. In spite of this, I really like this story so far (the more I think about it, I might have read it before, but I'm not 100% sure yet).
-P.G.
Author's Response: Yes, I realized later in the story that I had misspelt the word, sorry about that, I have yet to change it in the first few chapters. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving
| 27 Jan 2009 4:31 am
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Reviewer: studiohq (Signed)
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wOWWW I had to review this chapter...WOWOWOWOW!!!!!
That was
wOW...
Author's Response: *Big grin blinds random people* Wow, thanks for stopping by to review!
"And the truth shall set you free." Well, we'll see, won't we....
Author's Response: You reminded me of Snape for some reason, "Hmm, we will see in time," lol. Thank you for reviewing!
lol, long tailed cat in a room full of rocking chairs! Haha, that's cool. Great chapter for a GREAt story.
Author's Response: Thank you, I thought it was funny as well.
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