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Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 30 Aug 2023 3:31 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how Harry is managing his anger. Uh oh on Draco…
Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 08 Feb 2017 11:52 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter
Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 28 Jun 2008 11:59 pm
Reviewer: VampireOfTheLibrary (Signed) [Report This]
    The italics in this chapter went funky. You need to fix that. It get's amnoying to look at, :)

    Author's Response: Oh dear, I'll do that.
Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 25 Jun 2008 4:40 am
Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The bark thing was great!

    Author's Response: Thank you Morgan! Lol, :)
Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 12 Jun 2008 6:42 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter! I'm glad Snape wasn't horrible about Occlumency with Harry, and maybe the books can help him, too. I think I might be willing to let Hermione help if I were Harry, though. She was able to help him learn a Summoning Charm in fourth-year, when he couldn't manage it in class. And I do wonder how Hermione knew Nagini's name.

    It's sad that Harry has so much trouble thinking of a safe place, though. Poor kid, no where really is safe for him, is it? What a terrible strain.

    So I'm anxious to see if Voldemort is going to attack, and Draco's coming up...that can't be good news...

    Author's Response: Hermione could help, I'm sure of it but this is something Harry fells he needs to do alone. Although he will have help soon, it is unwanted help. Oh dear, I think you may of found a typo. Hermione did not know Nagini's name? Well....maybe no one else will notice, (snicker). I probably need to do something about that. Draco is very bad news, he is Harry's tormentor...besides me and Snape. Thank you for reviewing.
Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 23 Mar 2008 11:52 am
Reviewer: RemindMeToBreathe (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story :3 Especially Harry's memories, they were wicked. I can't wait till you update. I love Draco ;3 he's my fave character (beside Snape). I'm looking forward to seeing how you write him and Harry interacting.
    -RemindMeToBreathe

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much! I sent chapter six of to my beta the other day so maybe you won't have to wait long for a knew chapter. Glad you like Draco! :)

    Scorpia

Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 19 Mar 2008 1:12 am
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    That was really good! I likd it very much! Hope the next chapter will be soon. Can't wait to read it!

    Author's Response: Thanks for makeing my 70th review Rhea! I'm very glad you like it!
Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 18 Mar 2008 6:07 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Now what? I'm glad Snape gave Harry the books, they remind me a little of how you meditate, and maybe they'll help him. Severus seems like the kind of teacher who prefers students to learn on their own initiative, instead of spoonfeeding them answers, kind of like a graduate professor. Great job!

    Author's Response: I'm workin on the next chapter which will feature, (drum role please)...Draco Malfoy! Do I get Yay's or Boo's? LOL, Thanks for all your reviews, I'm glad your enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 17 Mar 2008 8:47 am
Reviewer: Grimmjaw (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's mine! All mine!...
    I'm basking in the glow of a new chapter. Harry's considering giving up Quiddittch! For Sirius! I'm glad; it shows how much he appreciates him. In the books Harry was devastated that he couldn't play anymore. Thinking about the memory puts a smile of my face too.
    I loved Harry's thoughts on the Dursleys and the conversation with Hermione. "Today was the most Harry had talked about the Dursleys in his five years at Hogwarts, he had barely opened his mouth and had hated every minute of the short discussion." It never says in the books what his friends know of his homelife, but I think Harry would have said as little as possible too.
    I was pleasantly surprised that Harry gave into his inner child. Too bad Ron didn't finally get to see.
    Poor Harry. Was it that Harry couldn't think of a safe place for his Occlumency excercise? Or he couldn't feel safe?
    lol. I've forgotten to read the A/N sometimes in my impatience to read a new chapter. And I have trouble remember to spell Gryffindor correctly (usually i put Gryfinndor). I can't wait for the next chapter. It's so difficult to suffer through the wait between chapters.

    Author's Response:

    I'm trying to get chapters up quicker Grimmjaw, my teachers just don't understand that fan fiction should come first! (shakes head) What is wrong with them? :P Hehe.

    I am so glad you liked the chapter, it puts a big smile on my face and makes me want to write more! Harry couldn't find a place where he felt safe. To tell you the truth, I don't know where that place is going to be. OoO! Bad! Bad author! In the author note I just wanted to know how people liked Draco Malfoy, some people liked him others hated him. In chapter four I wrote Syltherin in stead of Slytherin! Your not the only one that can't spell the Houses names. :)

    Thanks so much for your review!

    Scorpia

Title: Chapter 5: Occlumency and Nightmares 17 Mar 2008 5:04 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love all of Harry's thoughts going on in here and I love the end especially when Harry is like, "wow Snape is gonna be a big ole git today" LOL I love Snape being a git. I am nervous about that last sentence though. Why must writer's make me suffer with their cliffhangers? Not nice! Great chappy, though!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Obsidian! I love cliff-hangers dear. :P Sorry to make you suffer, I'll go write so I cabn stop your suffering with another chapter. :)

    Thanks for the review!

    Scorpia


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