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Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 02 Sep 2023 9:54 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    They’re really trusting Malfoy. I hope that trust is well-placed!
Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 08 Feb 2017 8:05 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very funny chapter
Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 17 Mar 2009 8:24 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol...

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 28 Jun 2008 11:55 pm
Reviewer: VampireOfTheLibrary (Signed) [Report This]
    this was LONG, thanks for posting it!

    Author's Response: Lol, thanks!
Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 21 Jun 2008 9:36 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, it looks like Harry might be making a little progress with the Slytherins. We'll see about that, I suppose.

    I enjoyed seeing the classes, and I really like Harry's animagus form...I'm curious as to what Draco's might have been.

    It's good that Harry's making a little more progress with Occlumency and hopefully Draco will be able to help with that.

    I loved how the Gryffindors were so happy to see Harry. I wonder if Draco might be feeling a little jealous, or sad, or something, cause it's obvious that Harry has true friends who love him, while I don't think Draco does.

    I can't wait to see what the Gryffindors will do!

    Author's Response: I had no idea what Draco would be so I left it out. Who's to say it won't showe up later though, his form could be a ferrit. It would explain why he was so touchy about it, lol. Thank you Kristeh for a brilliant review!
Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 11 Jun 2008 10:38 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    So funny, I laughed the whole way through! One mistake I noticed which makes it really difficult to read (me anyway...) 'keep his and close' I think you mean wand not and! (; Please keep writing!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out that mistake Tabby, some times the stupidest things slip by the radar. Glad you enjoyed it, athough I'm trying to turn the humor down a bit. I don't want this to turn into a humor story when it was supposed to be drama! Lol, thank you again.
Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 09 Jun 2008 1:46 pm
Reviewer: Riley (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! I'M DYING HERE!I love it when Draco has a role in the story! You wrote this fic surprisingly well. I can't wait until Malfoy learns of the DA, if he ever does. Snape? Joking with Draco? Wow. That's new! lol

    Author's Response: Lol, thanks for the exciting review! I'll update as soon as I can but I'm still writing the chapter, :) Yeah, Snape has a sense of humor. Amazing right?
Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 07 Jun 2008 5:09 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Classes went well, I thought it was really funny when Harry was stunned at Snape and Malfoy's banter, he sounded like he was going to pass out! lol. Glad to see you came to a decision on the animagus form, as I said, I completely agree that your stallion idea fits Harry well.

    It's a good thing for that bond, otherwise Malfoy would be a blabbermouth over Harry's Occlumency lessons. I loved Snape's comment "Potter needs to build a resistance to annoyances. You fit the job perfectly, Mr. Malfoy.” hehe. Harry sure seems to have improved though.

    Speaking of things I loved; Harry's dramatics when the Gryffindors all hugged him cracked me up! I also thought the boy's comments about Hermione 'ruining' Harry's messy bed and the 'cannibal' comment back in the Slytheirn dorms were very funny comments.

    Man, I'm desperate to find out Harry's prank! You’re killing me! *gags and coughs dramatically* lol. I bet it will be awesome, I absolutely can't wait and am anxious for your next update. I’ll try to remember to brace myself, I’ll most likely be joining Ron and foflmao [fall on floor laughing my arse off] ;)

    P.S. Hey, I just had an idea! Wouldn’t it be just like Dumbledore to someday reveal to Harry that the bond was never actually placed on him and Malfoy? I swear, if you end up doing that, I’ll die laughing.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for you detailed and LONG review. I almost joined Harry in faiting when I saw the length of the review! Please don't die! I'll have the chapter up ASAP, I have to finish writing it first though, lol. Oh Gosh! That would be SO like Dumbledore, ROFL. I bet Harry and Draco would not be amused though, lol. Sadly, there really is a bond. Thanks for your review again!

Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 06 Jun 2008 7:31 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, the occlumancy lesson was great considering whats at stake for snape and harry if anyone finds out on the dark side. harrys animagus form looks really cool and can't wait to find out what the prank is

    Author's Response: Thanks Kreacher, :). Occulemency went very well, let's hope it lasts, lol.
Title: Chapter 11: An Occlumency Lesson and Pranking 06 Jun 2008 5:45 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Interesting how Malfoy is (hopefully) going to help Harry out with his Occlumency. I really hope the next chapter will be out soon since I'm eagerly awaiting the prank! :)

    Author's Response: I'm trying to get it up soon Alexis, :) Thank you for your review!

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