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Reviews For Come What May
-P.G. Author's Response: Thank you! They're fun to write, :)
Author's Response: The mood change has a lot to do with the characters and how they act, Harry's hiding most of his inner emotions well. But that's not healthy and I'm afraid the dam is going to break, pleanty of angst ahead. Thank you!
Author's Response: Sirius's attitude seems to change rather abruptly to Harry, it makes him nervous, he isn't sure what to say when his Godfather goes from happy to glum. I'm really glad you like it, thank you!
Author's Response: You know I can't tell you that, :P He only sees his throat when he's looking in the mirror, and by the way his hair looks I bet he doesn't do that too often. No worries, Harry has plenty of memories to remind him, he hasn't forgotten, but he's trying to. Thank you!
Poor Ron, he got sent away *sniffle* lol Let's hope that all the studying Molly makes him do for the rest of the summer doesn’t give him a concussion, hehe. As to the talk between the Malfoys, go Lucius! He was absolutely right; Draco really needs to get over himself and move on with life. Hmm, seems Harry is still suffering some after effect of his torture session (well duh! lol) Hopefully he'll be able to get over that soon enough. The ending was really funny. Though I don't particularly like Draco, the banter between them in your story gets me to laugh every time :) Can't wait to read more! I'll look out for the next chapter. Author's Response: I'll see if I can fix your dislike for the youngest Malfoy, :) He's gotten a bit better, but he has many challenges ahead. I'm glad you like the banter, it's fun to write. Thank you Beth!
What's this other group you'll be participating in? Never heard of it. Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out those mistakes. NaNoWriMo? That is National November Writers Month, you have to write 50,000 words of a story from scratch in the month on Nov. Or are you talking about my HP forum where we rate HP stories? The link to that should be in my profile and you can go to the Beginners Board to see what it is about if you like. :)
Author's Response: Thank you Kreacher!
Author's Response: (Grin) Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it. |
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