"He shook his head again in denial and handed the note back. The two wizards had been acting like this for half the day now, the sun now making its way up to its zenith, midday upon the Hogwarts castle."
I just wanted to express my appreciation for this paragraph. I think it is just a brilliant, skillfully compact way of setting the scene. So much accomplished in so few words. I am envious!
Very interesting story, oddly good.
this is very interesting!
i had a feeling it would be dean, good choice!
| Title: Chapter 27
| 03 Apr 2011 3:00 pm
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| Reviewer: GriffinRaven (Anonymous)
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Hmmmm. I can't help wondering if Draco became a death eater to please his father (and mother) in order to gain there approval....but also with a touch of fear if he refused?
I can't wait to learn more about this new divination professor and just how both Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy know of her? I fear just how long Draco's gossip that he wrote to his father about Harry and Ginny being a couple will remain unknown to Voldemort?
| Title: Chapter 16
| 03 Apr 2011 1:30 pm
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| Reviewer: GriffinRaven (Anonymous)
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Hmm....shouldn't young Harry, try reading some books about vampires, vampires culture, history etc? I'm going to guess that Harry's father Severus is going to be annoyed that he snuck out of his room & fell asleep in the Gryffindor common room, shudder!
Now that the whole school knows that Harry is a vampire, I do wonder just how they think it occurred...perhaps they think he was bitten or something? What about the reaction of the ministry or the general wizarding population? If the wizarding population has been informed by the daily prophet, how do the masses of witches and wizards feel about there savior the-boy-who-lived being a vampire?
| Title: Chapter 15
| 03 Apr 2011 1:18 pm
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| Reviewer: GriffinRaven (Anonymous)
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I can't help wondering if Harry's initial anger at Severus, over his conception was largely due to all of the sudden changes going on his life. But also finding out that many things he believed/or were told were lies. I do wonder if either/or both of them, might have felt some anger at all the time they'd lost together being father and son?
I do hope that it is revealed that Draco Malfoy was the person responsible for spreading the news about Harry being a vampire....because I'd love to see Severus take some for of revenge upon him, hehe! At least Draco didn't learn that Severus was also Harry's father, as this would have deadly to Severus's role as a spy! Looks as if young Harry, has gained another good friend in Dean Thomas.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 03 Apr 2011 12:47 pm
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Wow...truly wicked story! Poor Severus and Harry, both having to do some major readjusting! Severus has to learn what it means to be a father, and Harry has to learn to be a son and a vampire! Will Severus find out about the child abuse that his son, Harry suffered for 14yrs at the hands of the Dursleys?
Is this story exactly the same as the one on FanFiction.Net, or are there differences?
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