This is a wonderful companion piece to the original work. So enjoyed it. Thank you.
I like it, it really meshes well with Aspens characterisation of Harry. You really know how to capture the mood. I particularly like the end and the subtle shift in object, from the darkness of his perception to the darkness of his mind and the light that is his family which love him and which left unsaid still leave its mark on him. I can't wait until aspen's sequel's ready, come on!!! lol. :) Well if past example is anything to go by it should be bril. Cheers.
Title: Chapter 1
| 08 Mar 2008 8:23 pm
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Reviewer: firefly124 (Anonymous)
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This is a great peek into Harry's mind. Love it!
Title: Chapter 1
| 07 Mar 2008 10:36 am
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Reviewer: rosemary (Anonymous)
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this is very well written, evocative and well structured.
I enjoyed reading it, and would have enjoyed a longer piece (good writing should always be long).
Title: Chapter 1
| 06 Mar 2008 2:29 am
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Reviewer: Korey (Anonymous)
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Very nice, you seem to have a great understanding of AYLNO Harry's mind :) Thanks for the wonderful story.
Oh, I love it. You really capture Harry's state of mind here. Thanks so much for posting this. I love, love, love it!
Aspen
Title: Chapter 1
| 03 Mar 2008 7:55 pm
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Reviewer: Just_A_Fan (Anonymous)
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Very enjoyable. ^^ Great closing line.
Title: Chapter 1
| 27 Feb 2008 4:50 pm
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Reviewer: anamaria (Anonymous)
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Oh poor Harry! This is so moving!
Title: Chapter 1
| 25 Feb 2008 12:52 pm
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Reviewer: Kazza (Anonymous)
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Wow! You've said so much with so few words. A wonderfully crafted story.
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