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Title: A New Friend 29 Dec 2008 6:04 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, flying beagles! It would be cool if Harry could learn to cast wandless magic while he was in America. Maybe it would be easier for him when he gets his magic back.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    It might and I love the flying beagle image, can you just see those ears?? LOL!

Title: Promises To Keep 29 Dec 2008 9:38 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter--I'm surprised that Harry isn't getting jealous of Mia for getting so much attention from Sev. She is adorable though and I'm glad she's getting along with her "almost" big brother Harry.

    The beagle made me smile. One of my earliest memories is of my dad getting me a beagle, which was my first pet. We went to this big outdoor pen and several were running around; the slowest one was the only one dad could catch and so he's the one we got. He looked just like you described Harry's dog too, which is awesome.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    You just gotta love Mia, she's a doll.  And I don't think Harry's the jealous type.  Ron maybe, but not Harry.

    I have a beautiful beagle named Rocky and I just love him to pieces, he acts just like Rosie sometimes, and he got into plenty of trouble as puppy, but I wouldn't trade him for anything.  Beagles are so sweet and they are awesome pets.  I had several growing up too.  I figured Harry deserved one.

Title: Remember When? 29 Dec 2008 7:20 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, I loved the memories--especially the one with James saying he wouldn't mind Lily spanking him, lmao!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Yeah that was one of my favorites too, James is so . . .kinky, LOL! And it's a typical thing for him to suggest to Lily.
Title: Past Imperfect 29 Dec 2008 6:47 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that they are finally going to get to heal. I'm very excited that you mentioned having Sev's memory's of a two year-old Harry next chapter because I am such a sucker for baby stories.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Then you'll love the next chapter, it has lots of baby Harry in it.  And if you like little Harry stories, you should read my Never Again series, it's all about Harry as a toddler and a small child, it starts with a thirteen month old Harry, Lily, and Severus in Where Shadows Go. Thanks for rreading!
Title: Done With It 29 Dec 2008 1:42 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, I like how Snape discovering Harry eavesdropping was so anticlimactic. Great chapter!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks, this was one of my favorites to write, I love a ranting righteous Snape and Dumbledore really deserved it here! And having Harry listen to it made it easier for him to accept Sev as his dad who really loved him and explained why he acted the way he did towards Harry previously.
Title: Lily's Gift 29 Dec 2008 1:29 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG, this is exciting! I'm curious about the time change: how they are all together still in 1982. Great fic so far; I'm totally caught up in it!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    In this AU, Voldemort never came for the Potters until Harry was two, so that's why they are all still alive in 1982.  I wanted to give Sev and Lily and harry more time together to form family bonds and memories, so that's why I altered the timeline slightly.  Hope that answers your question.

     

    Thanks again for reviewing this one and hope you like it.

Title: Remember When? 28 Dec 2008 10:43 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, VERY clever with the Robin Hood bit! Btw, I don't know if it was in this chapter or the last, but you mentioned Harry thinking that Melody was his second cousin. I don't know if you want to change that or not, but she'd actually be his first cousin once removed. Her daughter Mia would be Harry's second cousin. Sorry, not trying to be nit-picky or anything! It took me YEARS to figure out how the cousin thing worked, lol. But, I understand if keep it as is because that's what Harry 'thinks'.

    Author's Response: You're right about the cousin thing, I know because I have so many of them.  But I wanted to keep Harry's thought processes mistaken since he has no clue about family relationships, growing up the way he did.  Perhaps Sev might have a discussion with him in a future book about it.  And that Robin Hood part is one of my favs, I love the movie, and so many people never realized that Alan Rickman was the sheriff, LOL!
Title: Promises To Keep 06 Nov 2008 6:47 am
Reviewer: Ash (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay, I'm not sure what country you're from, but I'm annoyed when people say we 'drive on the wrong side of the road'. It's so misunderstood. It just sounds nicer when you say something like 'on the other side of the . No big deal though, I'm still going to read!

    Author's Response: I'm from America and the one reason I put that in there is because of an exchange student who made that comment to my sister, it's something that a typical European notices and remarks upon.  No offense!
Title: A New Friend 27 Oct 2008 5:48 am
Reviewer: Baghdaelf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have really been enjoying this. Keep it up!

    I was really surprised to see the mention of the Alaskan Klee Kai. I love them! Very few people I have mentioned them to know what they are. Do you have one?

    Author's Response: I read about them in a magazine and watched a TV show and they seemed like very cool dogs.  No, I don't own one, I have a beagle, like the one in the story, but I like putting new and different animals in my stories.  Thanks for reviweing.
Title: Always A Snape 06 Sep 2008 8:53 pm
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think I am going to love this story. You hav eto write a sequel.

    Author's Response: I did already.  There is a small one-shot that comes inbetween this story,, called Depression Cure, and the sequel, called Hide Yourself From A Prisoner, also posted here.

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