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Reviews For Harry and the Easter Bunny
Author's Response: Thanks - I'm glad you liked it :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Kristeh - I just couldn't resist writing it after watching my sons fretting about the preparations for the Easter Bunny over the whole afternoon :-) Happy Easter to you too!
Author's Response: Thanks - I'm glad you liked it :-)
There were a couple of sentences that didn't make sense: “Normally, Harry doesn’t make a mess; in fact, if Minerva didn’t want people to know that he was there. (I think you meant to put a comma after there?) ‘It’s much too funny when Aunt Poppy and Uncle Severus are here as well, and maybe I can get a small glimpse of the Easter bunny,’ Harry thought. (It's much too fun. I don't think kids or people say "much too funny".) Good job and thanks for sharing!! Author's Response: Maybe I'll have him dress as an Easter bunny for carnival some time ;-) Thanks for pointing out the mistakes - I was nearly asleep when I wrote that! I only decided to write the story after putting my children to bed, thinking about what they had been doing all afternoon ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks Twinheart, I'm glad you liked it :-)
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