I was delighted at your writing style, especially the scenes from toddler Harry's point of view. The only drawback to your exposition was my confusion as to which characters were speaking or being referred to; I repeatedly had to backtrack and reread to sort things out after the exposition was complete. Other than that, your story was summer joy! Thank you! 😺
I really enjoyed this story. Harry's inner voice was so precious.
| Title: Crapilogue
| 01 Feb 2018 10:30 pm
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| Title: This Little Baby
| 01 Feb 2018 10:24 pm
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Thank you a lovely chapter
| Title: In Safe Hands
| 01 Feb 2018 10:18 pm
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Thank you a lovely chapter
| Title: A Stranger is Watching
| 01 Feb 2018 9:46 pm
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Lovely story I love Harry's perspective thank you
That last bit made my heart ache, just a bit. :( A nice little story, nevertheless. Well done! I enjoyed it.
Awww, Snape. D: For all his fault, he really can be rather selfless when he's so inclined, can't he?
Poor little Harry! Those Dursleys are just awful - completely and utterly awful! D: How anyone could be so dreadful to a child is beyond me. I suppose it always will be.
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