Title: The Sorcerer’s Stone
| 25 Feb 2007 1:54 am
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Reviewer: aorli (Anonymous)
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what a gem! i love your version of things; it's exactly what i'd expect had things happened the way you set them. bravo!
Title: The Sorcerer’s Stone
| 20 Feb 2007 4:49 am
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Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Fabulous!! I think I started this before. The updates took us through the first year and it was very interesting. Harry seems much older and wiser than the others. You have a great ability to narrow the scenes down to the most important points and make the story seem more like flashes of action. I can't believe that they put Harry in the broom cubbord. Please tell us that Snape will save his son?
Title: Lessons
| 19 Feb 2007 12:03 pm
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Reviewer: Becky (Anonymous)
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I like your stoey until Niamh showed up. I don't mean that as a slight to your writing or anything, I just don't like Mary Sues or OC's. (We're here to read about Harry and Snape after all)
Take care,
and keep writing,
B.
Title: Diagon Alley
| 11 Dec 2005 3:00 am
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Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous)
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Hello, I have to congratulate you on your excellent writing and great imagination. However, I am curious about Harry looking like Snape...Are you implying Lily and Snappie poo got it on? Because that would be wrong and a horrible plot that I would only be able to rate as the highest. *wink wink* Love ya story and write more.
Title: Diagon Alley
| 14 Apr 2005 9:45 am
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Reviewer: nljfs (Anonymous)
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Hi, I like the story ... will we ever see Tyls again?
Title: Diagon Alley
| 28 Feb 2005 12:05 am
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Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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Ah, love this story, truly an epic of epic proportions ;)
Title: Diagon Alley
| 03 Feb 2005 1:47 pm
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Reviewer: ,00, (Anonymous)
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Excellent Story. Read all of it at FFN.
Title: The-Boy-Who-Was-Lost
| 29 Jan 2005 10:48 pm
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Reviewer: Dattatreya (Anonymous)
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Very interesting. You have a good understanding of dialect. Perhaps a bit more character intrespection is in order though.
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