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Reviews For Bitter
I keep trying to figure out what those beans were. I though they were coffee but one of the reviewers mentioned chocolate. That seems more likely? You are very good at gloomy/hard times! fic, not just in this but in general. (I've read everything you have on this site except "In Safe Hands," which I'm about to read.) I commend you. :)
Great use of words and descriptions. I liked how Snape said "Lily's eyes" instead of Harry's in, "Potter blinked; the first sign of life coming back into Lily's eyes. Not nearly enough." Good job! Author's Response: The Dementors might be gone now, but effects will linger. Poor Harry had it the worst, as usual. And he made a cake because the chat people made me do it. :-P
But this was really good! We will have to come up with more silly ideas at he chat so YOU can turn them into great stories. :D Scorpia Author's Response: A sequel for a CAKE fic? That would just be wrong on so many levels! On the other hand, I do have a plot bunny stashed here somewhere that's labeled "Hogwarts is destroyed. Everyone dies." Hmm.... |
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