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Reviews For All He Sees
Title: All He Sees 17 Feb 2024 9:23 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Nicely insightful
Title: All He Sees 04 Feb 2022 12:05 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    So very true
Title: All He Sees 24 Sep 2014 4:04 pm
Reviewer: Arwen_Evenstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Beautiful!
Title: All He Sees 02 May 2008 1:29 am
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice! I love the idea that at the end Snape stillll wasn't seeing Harry- he was just seeing Lily! Good work!

    Author's Response: Thanks! It was the first thing that came into my head after Snape's death, that he never really saw Harry, only James and Lily. Quite sad really, because I honestly think they could have got on if he'd only gotten over that bitterness.
Title: All He Sees 01 May 2008 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    This was simple and sad and brilliant, and I loved it. It summed up JKR's characterization of Severus perfectly.

    Author's Response: Yay! Perfectly, can't get better than that! Thanks!
Title: All He Sees 01 May 2008 9:31 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    True and how sad! Great job, it's almost poetic!

    Author's Response: Wow. Two people have said it's poetic now. Huh. I guess it's so short it does end up reading a bit like a poem!
Title: All He Sees 01 May 2008 9:06 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww! It was good but I want more, :(
    Please write more stories soon!

    Author's Response:

    I'm sort of tentatively working on a longer story right now, but I've barely written one chapter, and have no idea where I'm heading, so don't expect to see it anytime soon.

    I do write oneshots a lot though, so there will be more of those coming!

Title: All He Sees 01 May 2008 7:53 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really liked that. Very poetic and peaceful and yet very tragic and full of anger. Very well done. I liked the words that you used and the way you organized your sentences; it made the read much more poignant. Thanks.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm always worried that I don't get everything I want to say across in a drabble like this, so it's nice to know that I, you know, did. Ug. I can't talk in review replies, can I?

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