hmm. i wonder what hes going to do. :)
It's been four years, any plans to finish the story?
| Title: Chapter 5
| 14 May 2010 4:31 am
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| Reviewer: legolasanimeluver (Anonymous)
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I absolutely love this story! Please update soon! I cannot wait to find out what happens next! Oh I just got an idea: Have Harry start transforming in to a beautiful mix of lilly and Snape, but for fun have Harry's personality start becoming more and more Snape-like!(giggles) It would be fun to read-all gryffindors start becoming weary of Harry because he reminds them of Snape!
Very very Good more please!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 19 Jan 2010 11:04 pm
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| Reviewer: LupinLover13 (Anonymous)
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this is sooo good!! update update update!!! i really enjoyed reading this and the way you explained how lily and severus had harry, about both of them tricking eachother into doing what they want, instead of Lily and Severus somehow loving eachother until the end, which, yes, severus did, but lily didn't. This is good. i like it and I'll say it again, update!!!
I don't think this is bad - a little rushed, maybe - but not bad. I think it could benefit from a little more progression, to give the transitions a little more time, but in essence I think it's a good chapter.
so good. I like how its going actually, you keep us interested and of course twisted the regular severus is harrys father story by making it be so by adultery.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 24 Sep 2008 5:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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Pretty deep are you studying psychology?
Author's Response: i am now, but i wasn't when i was writing it... i mean, not officially. i read a lot of stuff on it in my spare time. i may be getting back to this story at some point, i'm trying to finish all my started and abandoned fanfics, for now i'm working on Lost Boy but hopefully i'll get them all finished one day.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 22 Jun 2008 9:18 am
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| Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous)
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Super! I love your story. Bit of a tear-jerker near the end! I can't wait for lots more story!! I hope you write more soon!
brilliant chapter, i love the story so far! update asap x
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