| Title: Chapter 4
| 05 Feb 2015 11:29 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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HMM INTERESTING A SPELL ? LOL MORE PLEASE
I believe you have the makings of an excellent story here. Having read the chapters posted I'm concerned that there is no depth to the plot. I'm not sure if you are relying on canon or using an Alternate Universe. There is no reason in your story why Snape would be hostile to Harry. Is the reason canon & James Potter was a bully to Severus? I'm impressed that you have found the voice of a 4yr old in your story. Looking forward to reading further updates.
| Title: Chapter 4
| 04 Feb 2015 6:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Realmente una muy interesante idea
| Title: The Combination of Three Chapters
| 04 Oct 2011 4:59 am
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| Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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When will you update this story? I am dying to know what happens next!
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
| Title: The Combination of Three Chapters
| 26 Jan 2009 11:47 pm
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| Reviewer: studiohq (Signed)
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So the Bitch queen was a witch also and just a low powered one. That's why she couldn't go to Hogwarts?
Good chapter. Please update soon!!
| Title: The Combination of Three Chapters
| 28 May 2008 6:57 pm
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| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed)
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what a good chapter, severus is the hero of the hour, just one complaint about this so far the spelling of privet drive is wrong and i feel that if ut's a place from the hp world, you should know how to spell locations properly
| Title: The Combination of Three Chapters
| 22 May 2008 7:59 am
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| Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed)
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Go Sev and I loved that last line! I've written a story with a 6 year old Harry here too if you like to read it. it's called Never Again and it focuses on the relationship between Severus, Harry, and Tobias Snape.
Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful review! I'll be happy to check out your story :)
Good start! I look forward to reading future chapters.
Author's Response: Why Thank you =]
| Title: The Combination of Three Chapters
| 21 May 2008 5:09 am
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| Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous)
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Good start.Snape would make a good Papa... Petunia is a witch? is Dudley going to be magical as well. Petunia obviously knows Sev. i am interested in how all this is going to play out. looking forward to another chapter
Author's Response: Yeah I am having fun with this story =]
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