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Reviews For Hard To Be Humble
Title: Hard To Be Humble 17 Sep 2008 12:25 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Agree!

    Author's Response: Lol, thanks. :)
Title: Hard To Be Humble 04 Jul 2008 12:36 am
Reviewer: Aethyr (Signed) [Report This]
    Certainly a very amusing little story. It was a fun read. It's difficult imagining Snape in such a surreal, awkward situation; you wrote him quite well.

    A few criticisms:
    You should probably read it over two or three times before you post. There are a number of grammatical mistakes, as well as a few typos I'm sure you would have caught.
    Some of the dialogue and accompanying actions/expressions seem a bit forced; there are points when the characters' don't sound completely natural (mostly occurring in the second half of the story).
    Also, cut some of the adverbs. Yes, Rowling had the same problem, but because your story is very short, it is more noticeable. Many of the adverbs don't add any value to the story; well-written voice and action require no additional description.

    I hope this helps! Thank you for your own prolific reviews; it means a lot.

    Pax vobiscum,
    Aethyr

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your constructive criticism, It is welcomed. I will go back and read over the story. It was written rather quickly, I'm afraid I was rather fast with proofreading. Thank you for your review!

    Scorpia

Title: Hard To Be Humble 01 Jul 2008 3:02 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I've never heard it before, but I'd have to agree--it's definitely Lockhart. And I was so proud of Sev when he slugged the idiot and knocked him out. It was really funny though!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much Snapegirl! Glad you enjoyed and thanks for your response!
Title: Hard To Be Humble 01 Jul 2008 1:16 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This oneshot was sooo cute and funny!! and yes, the song fits Lockhart ... gruesome good. ^^ Please, write more Severus-Ron-Harry-stories!!!
    Your Melfis.

    Author's Response: If I can think of more oneshots involving those characters, I will probably write them, :) Thank you for your response!
Title: Hard To Be Humble 30 Jun 2008 5:20 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this was a LOT of fun! Yes, "It's Hard to be Humble" should indeed be Gilderoy Lockhart's anthem--too perfect!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I thought the song was perfect, if only it was not a country song. That part was kind of hard imagining, Lockhart does not seem the kind to sing country, lol. Thank you for reviewing.
Title: Hard To Be Humble 29 Jun 2008 5:11 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Great one-shot. *Very* funny! And your Snape was quite IC.

    Author's Response: Thank you, kepping him in character was hard with the sitouation he had to deal with, lol. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Hard To Be Humble 29 Jun 2008 5:48 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    This is hilarious, Scorpia! I actually love Lockhart, just because he is so hilarious! But in RL he would be awfully annoying. I can just picture Severus' face and his disgust with having to deal with someone like Lockhart.

    The best part was Sev punching him!

    Author's Response: I enjoyed reading about Lockhart in the books, he's different from all the others. And he's so funny...even if he does not mean to be so, lol. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Hard To Be Humble 29 Jun 2008 5:26 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    *dies laughing* Oh yes, that song is SO Lockhart! I think if I was there I'd be stuck between being disturbed by the idiot's performance and laughing hysterically at the ridiculousness.

    Funny short-story, I had loads of fun reading it :). Poor Ron and Snape definitely suffered through that experience.

    P.S. I totally cheered Snape on when he punched Lockhart out! :D

    Author's Response: Thank you, I thought it was Lockhart as well, lol. Yes, Snape slugging Lockhart was great, hehe. If only it had happened in the books, sigh. Thank you for reviewing Beth!
Title: Hard To Be Humble 28 Jun 2008 11:51 pm
Reviewer: VampireOfTheLibrary (Signed) [Report This]
    I have never heard of the song, it sounds funny! Hope the one who sang it was being sarcastic, ;) Great job, I really liked it!

    Author's Response: It's a funny song. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Hard To Be Humble 28 Jun 2008 8:45 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great! I loved how Snape punched Lockheart. And how Myrtle was excited about Harry's potential death. Nicely written!

    Author's Response: Thjank you bunches Alexis!

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