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Reviews For Love Everlasting
Title: Chapter four 29 May 2017 4:29 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you can save her Severus Snape.
Title: Chapter four 02 Mar 2011 3:57 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter; enjoyed Severus' internal monologue and dialogue with Lily
Title: Chapter three 02 Mar 2011 3:53 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Really loved the scene between Lily and Severus, it felt very realistic
Title: Chapter two 02 Mar 2011 3:49 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting developments, liked the internal monologues
Title: Chapter one 02 Mar 2011 3:47 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting premise; I can't see Severus upsetting Harry if it would upset/anger Lily, however. Well written with nice character interaction
Title: Chapter four 15 Mar 2010 6:16 am
Reviewer: hypercell (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you update, this is really interesting!
Title: Chapter four 11 Oct 2008 9:57 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i love it.please continue

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I have not forgotten about this story, I'm just working on Selene right now. But I hope to update all of my stories soon. But no promises. Again thanks!
Title: Chapter four 22 Aug 2008 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Just_A_Reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Still going strong. ^^

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter one 22 Aug 2008 8:41 pm
Reviewer: Just_A_Reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good start. ^^

    May I point out a few typos?
    1) "So of course *their* going to do everything in their power to gain custody of him in the event that something should happen to you." -> they're
    2) "*You'r* mother's been ill?" -> your
    3)"And what would happen when I need him to Spy again," -> I don't see why 'spy' should be capitalized and you may want to end there with a question mark.
    4)"Don't even start on the whole 'respect teacher*'*s' lecture, Hermione." -> omit that '
    5)"It was *diffrent*, but alright." -> different

    Ok, that's about it.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I have said it before and I'll say it again, Grammer isn't my strong suit. Thanks for telling me my errors.
Title: Chapter four 08 Aug 2008 7:22 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    I apologize for not reviewing every chapter, but I've been totally busy, so I read right through this fic -- and I totally freaking love it! Please keep writing! I can't wait to read what happens next!! >

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I am very happy you are enjoying it so far. And you don't have to apologize, I do the same thing. LOL! I hope to update soon. Thanks!

    Nightshade


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