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Reviews For Love Everlasting
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I have not forgotten about this story, I'm just working on Selene right now. But I hope to update all of my stories soon. But no promises. Again thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you!
May I point out a few typos? 1) "So of course *their* going to do everything in their power to gain custody of him in the event that something should happen to you." -> they're 2) "*You'r* mother's been ill?" -> your 3)"And what would happen when I need him to Spy again," -> I don't see why 'spy' should be capitalized and you may want to end there with a question mark. 4)"Don't even start on the whole 'respect teacher*'*s' lecture, Hermione." -> omit that ' 5)"It was *diffrent*, but alright." -> different Ok, that's about it. Author's Response: Thank you! I have said it before and I'll say it again, Grammer isn't my strong suit. Thanks for telling me my errors.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am very happy you are enjoying it so far. And you don't have to apologize, I do the same thing. LOL! I hope to update soon. Thanks! Nightshade |
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