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Reviews For In The Eyes
Title: In The Eyes 04 Feb 2022 12:07 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Really sweet and sad all at once
Title: In The Eyes 04 Jul 2008 3:20 pm
Reviewer: Yasona Black (Signed) [Report This]
    awww, poor snape! you kept him very in character, and wrote it very well.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I really was worried that Snape was out of character here, it's nice to see so many people disprove me!
Title: In The Eyes 04 Jul 2008 9:24 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    How beautiful, and how sad too. It really makes me want to cry at the sheer waste...that Severus could have let himself love Harry, that he could have had some happiness again and given it to Harry too...and he chose not to. That's the real tragedy of Severus' life.

    Thank you for writing this beautiful, haunting little piece.

    Author's Response:

    You're welcome! Wow, people don't usually thank me for writing something, usually I thank them for reviewing. So thanks for the review.

    Yeah, it really was a waste. It could have been such a beautiful relationship. And you're right, Severus's real tragedy is his choices, and his pride. If he'd just let himself love Harry, they both could have been so happy...

Title: In The Eyes 04 Jul 2008 8:25 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow, very nicely done. It actually brought a tear to my eye. Very short and to the point so it packs a punch! I wish he'd look at him.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Making people cry - my aim in life. ;)
Title: In The Eyes 04 Jul 2008 6:57 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Poor Sev, he's so conflicted and bitter here. I think someone ought to give him a hug.

    Author's Response: Fantastic idea. I shall go away and write a story where he gets a hug immediately!

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