I feel likeI am reading a Sparks book😫 so we’ll written👍
Title: I Wish
| 16 Jun 2014 10:07 am
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Reviewer: Chelsey (Anonymous)
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Good story so far. However, Polaris is not the brightest star in the sky, not even close. The only thing remarkable about that star is that it lines up with our magnetic pole fairly well for now. The brightest star in the northern hemisphere is Sirius. Sorry I work for a planetarium and this bothered me. Other wise I really like your writing :)
Title: I Wish
| 16 Jun 2014 10:04 am
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Reviewer: Chelsey (Anonymous)
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Good story so far. However, Polaris is not the brightest star, not even close. The brightest star I the northern hemisphere is Sirius. Sorry I work at a planetarium and this bothered me a lot.
Title: Playing With Fire
| 18 Feb 2014 8:28 pm
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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THIS WS INCREDIBLE!!! i loved it soo soo soo much ur absolutely rite abt lily i feel sad but i no it'll b okay in the end thx so much for this lovely story it ws brilliantly written!
That was an absolutley wonderful story. I needed the klennexes, trust me. I had read some of the Never Again series but I was struggling to make it all make sense, i confess it wasn't always in order. This story has prompted me to go back to them and enjoy the rest of the saga. I really do wish that it could have been happier-without Lily dying-but I know you have written more which is the only reason I am not crying becuase it's the end. Keep Writing Please (maybe even an alternative universe to this story where Lily lives on and it's all about the dynamics of how this little family continues)
That was an absolutley wonderful story. I needed the klennexes, trust me. I had read some of the Never Again series but I was struggling to make it all make sense, i confess it wasn't always in order. This story has prompted me to go back to them and enjoy the rest of the saga. I really do wish that it could have been happier-without Lily dying-but I know you have written more which is the only reason I am not crying becuase it's the end. Keep Writing Please (maybe even an alternative universe to this story where Lily lives on and it's all about the dynamics of how this little family continues)
Title: My Heart Will Go On
| 03 May 2010 6:04 am
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Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Oh yes--- I have to put Kleenex on my shopping list, coz I'm running awfully low after getting thru this story. In "Steel Magnolias", Truvy said that laughter through tears was her favorite emotion. I think you've managed to create similar emotion in many chapters of this story. Even when I wasn't crying sadly, I could laugh 'til I cried! Thanks for a splendid ride!
WHOOOOAAAAA!!!!!!!! That was HYSTERICAL!!!!!!!!! I was sitting in the exam room at the vet's, waiting for my cat's x-rays to come back, reading this chapter on my cell phone, and EVERYONE IN THE BUILDING heard me burst out LAUGHINGGGGGGGG! It's not the sort of thing I could actually EXPLAIN, so I'm sure they thought I was going looney-toons for sure. Absolutely AWESOME!!!!!! YES, I LOVED SEV SINGING!!!
Oh how I balled over this bloody story!! My two year old came over and said "It's ok mommy." and then proceded to wipe my tears away of course that only made it worse thinking of what little Harry would have done for Lily or even Sev. This is a brilliant if not heartbreaking story. Thank you for sharing it.
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