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Title: Ten Year Latter: Friendship Like No Other 24 Jan 2011 5:04 pm
Reviewer: SpicyKittins (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! A new trio...I hope you update soon...this is interesting :D
Title: Ten Year Latter: Friendship Like No Other 06 Jul 2008 11:56 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    O.K. I like the idea of this story pretty well. Harry has to struggle against his training to eventually do the right thing. But he's not really struggling much at this point. The friendships seem to be coming too quickly. I don't mind him helping Draco at this point, but I really wonder why you needed an OC when there are canon muggle-borns that could have been used. The reason may be clear later on, but random OC's are a major turn-off for many readers. The last line of this chapter also just seemed a little too sappy--and I can usually take a lot of sap where Harry is concerned. In a sense, you are "telling" us that this friendship will be special, but you need to "show" us this or we won't really believe it. I am looking forward to superpower!Harry and can't wait to see him pwn some more bullies. ;-)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I'm sorry if I'm moving too fast. That's one of my big flaws. I'll work on slowing it down, I just really wanted to get that part out of the way. Again sorry. As for the OC, you'll really just have to keep reading to find out why I didn't just use a canon muggle-born. I'll consider your advice about random OC's. And the ending, I'll admit; it wasn't really good. Again sorry. I hope you'll like the rest of the story. Thanks for reviewing and your opinion! 

Title: Ten Year Latter: Friendship Like No Other 06 Jul 2008 9:37 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    very interesting - very interesting indeed

    I wonder - will Severus have to pretend to be a loyal deatheather in this one?

    Author's Response: Thank you!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Ten Year Latter: Friendship Like No Other 06 Jul 2008 4:57 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Draco! Yay! Hehe, will this be...(shiver)...slash? I should of read the summary all the way through I guess, lol. I'm still loving the plot idea. Harry has a cool new name. Alex Night, :D He will do great things, lol.
    Scorpia

    Author's Response:

    No! Lol! This will not be a slash. This is simply my remake of the trio. Though I am wondering if I should add Ron and Hermione. What do you think? Thanks again for reviewing!

    P.S Yes, Alex Night aka Harry Potter Snape will do GREAT THINGS! Hehehe! :)

Title: Nyssa’s Revenge 06 Jul 2008 4:54 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear, the sister of Severus. What shall we do with ANOTHER Snape? Lol, great idea! I have never seen any like it. Please keep writing this. Baby Harry was cute, :D
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad at least one person likes this story. After I started it I started wondering if it was a good idea. Thanks again for reviewing!

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