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Reviews For A Secret Gift
Title: Healing 10 Jun 2022 12:47 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Super touching. A little sap never hurt anyone!
Title: Healing 05 Nov 2020 3:27 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely fluffy chapter
Title: Healing 06 Dec 2008 6:15 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    "...we could only once step in the holy garden." What a lovely way to describe the sacred quality of lovemaking with one's heart's desire.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! Poor Severus... Mila
Title: Healing 21 Nov 2008 3:06 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the finished version and I love the sap. The end just makes me want to give both Sev and Harry a hug, and I still think the last sentence is a great one to end a chapter on. Well done!

    Author's Response: Thank you, Jen!
Title: Healing 21 Nov 2008 12:08 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, at least we know it wasn't DD. Ron is such a git!

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Heh, I present Dumbledore as a kind of villain, but even he was not responsible for every bad thing :) Oh, yes, Ron is a git (The canon Ron was a git too, on occasions *cough-goblet-of-fire-cought* Mila
Title: Healing 20 Nov 2008 11:35 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was very clever of Severus to reveal Harry's paternity that way. I'm glad Harry finally got to spend some quality time with his dad and I hope he tells Dumbledore to get lost. Maybe Hermione will dump Ron for being such a jerk and go out with Harry. They'd be great together.

    How sad that Lily was the one to Obliviate Sev's memory. But the last line was great!
    Any chance of a relationship between Sev & Scilla?

    FYI-just updated WSG

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Snapegirl *waves* Well, I hinted and hinted that it was probably Dumbledore (who Obliviated Sev) and Lily as a culprit was meant to be a surprise. I hope it worked.

    I think Scilla is much older than Severus. How old is Poppy, anyway?  Mila

Title: Healing 20 Nov 2008 11:04 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh this is so sad. I am really enjoying this story and I'm so glad that you decided to expand it into a longer story. Nice work, I love the interaction between Snape and Harry, and how you delve into the characters feelings.

    Author's Response: Is it sad? I am sorry. Well, at least Harry is getting better, right? It was hard to balance plot and feelings. Thank you very much for your praise, Mila
Title: Healing 20 Nov 2008 11:02 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter, it's my favourite one so far. I especially liked how you described Harry's emotions, from anger to confusion.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much. Emotions were hard to write; I am glad you liked the result :) Mila
Title: Healing 20 Nov 2008 10:23 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you *waves* Mila

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