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Reviews For A Secret Gift
Title: Healing 20 Nov 2008 11:35 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    That was very clever of Severus to reveal Harry's paternity that way. I'm glad Harry finally got to spend some quality time with his dad and I hope he tells Dumbledore to get lost. Maybe Hermione will dump Ron for being such a jerk and go out with Harry. They'd be great together.

    How sad that Lily was the one to Obliviate Sev's memory. But the last line was great!
    Any chance of a relationship between Sev & Scilla?

    FYI-just updated WSG

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Snapegirl *waves* Well, I hinted and hinted that it was probably Dumbledore (who Obliviated Sev) and Lily as a culprit was meant to be a surprise. I hope it worked.

    I think Scilla is much older than Severus. How old is Poppy, anyway?  Mila

Title: Healing 20 Nov 2008 11:04 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh this is so sad. I am really enjoying this story and I'm so glad that you decided to expand it into a longer story. Nice work, I love the interaction between Snape and Harry, and how you delve into the characters feelings.

    Author's Response: Is it sad? I am sorry. Well, at least Harry is getting better, right? It was hard to balance plot and feelings. Thank you very much for your praise, Mila
Title: Healing 20 Nov 2008 11:02 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter, it's my favourite one so far. I especially liked how you described Harry's emotions, from anger to confusion.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much. Emotions were hard to write; I am glad you liked the result :) Mila
Title: Healing 20 Nov 2008 10:23 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you *waves* Mila
Title: Father 04 Nov 2008 2:07 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "Wow, I think that's the Calming Draught speaking, not me." i love this line.i think snape fight for harry now.snape is amazing father and harry is sweet child.i love your story

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Mila
Title: Father 04 Nov 2008 2:29 am
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    One word...AWWWWWWWWWWWW

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! Mila
Title: Father 03 Nov 2008 8:09 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've just discovered your story and I really like it! I'm glad Harry can get some professionnal help and I hope Harry and Severus can get their way despite Dumbledore meddling!
    update soon please

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your praise. I was afraid Dumbledore-fans will have my hide for the "Dumbledore bashing" but honestly, what can one think after reading The Prince's Tale? Mila
Title: Father 03 Nov 2008 7:59 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, that's so cute. But I wonder if Harry will feel the same way when the calming draught wears off! ;)

    Update soon, I want to find out if they can trick a manipulative Dumbledore! :)

    Author's Response: Yeah! You guessed what the next chapter is about! And to the second one: Snape can trick everyone! Go Snape! Thank you for your review, Mila
Title: Father 03 Nov 2008 7:31 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay they finally have that out in the open. But I want to find out why Sev can't remember that he and Lily were intimate? Could it be he was Obliviated by Albus? I hope he decides not to become a spy anymore, Harry needs his father and he needs Harry too.

    Author's Response: You will find out *promise*. And yes, Severus will stop spying. Awww, shouldn't have said that, shouldn't have said that. *grin* Thank you for your review, Mila
Title: Father 03 Nov 2008 5:03 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    It's still just as great as when I first read it - very sweet and appropriate!

    Author's Response: Thank you *waves* Mila

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