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Reviews For A Secret Gift
Title: A Private Hell 05 Oct 2008 8:45 pm
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is just so sweet! And you manage so well to show Harry's innermost feelings and how they are reflected in his actions - very good!!! Some might say that he is acting too childish, but I think with all the pressure and no comfort at all, everybody would start to act like that! I hope, he'll get help now - especially since Nephy is gone, and that Snape might be able to offer more active help later on!
    Thanx for a story well done so far!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your kind words. I am no expert, but I was led to believe that depressed children in their vulnerability tend to retreat into their "better (read younger)" years. His thoughts jumping on silly themes and never lasting too long were supposed to indicate the same, basically. I hope it worked. Lots of Snape in the next chapter. Mila

     

Title: A Private Hell 05 Oct 2008 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it, my dear. But... I kinda think you know that. ::winks::

    Such promise.

    All right, don't be afraid to e-mail me if you need to!

    Love,
    Julie.

    Author's Response: Thank you Lady Julie *grateful*
Title: Intangible Gift 28 Sep 2008 4:02 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very good chapter my dear.

    Greatly looking forward to more.

    ::winks::

    Yours,
    Lady Jewels.

    Author's Response: *waves* Thank you for beta reading it! And for encouragement... Mila
Title: Intangible Gift 28 Sep 2008 6:58 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good story. I hope you are going to fill in the details of why Harry is Snape's son and why Snape doesn't acknowledge it and when he found out.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. As everyone is asking about it, I think I will have to explain thoroughly :) Mila

Title: Intangible Gift 28 Sep 2008 5:37 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great chapter. I hope Scilla can help Harry the way she helped Severus and when will Sev tell Harry he is Harry's father?

    Author's Response: Thank you! I hope that the parts about Severus were not too sappy.  Mila
Title: A Suspicious Gift 24 Sep 2008 5:45 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you are carrying on with the story, Mila. This was lovely. Though I do have to say that Harry seems much younger than he is (I take it this is fifth year) and I would have thought he would know how to hold an owl, considering he had Hedwig for going on five years. I know you said that he was in a poor mental state..I suppose that is why he appears...'delicate' I suppose is the word I am looking for. He did not say one word during the exchange, I don't think. Ron and Hermione spoke for him.

    I wonder who the acquaintance is that Sev has to contact.

    And I don't know if I ever asked you before, but I wonder how Sev found out he is HArry's father and how long he has known.

    Keep up the good work.

    ~LesleY~
Title: A Suspicious Gift 22 Sep 2008 8:36 am
Reviewer: kella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great chapter
    i wonder what happened to hedwig?

    Author's Response: Thanks! Severus will go to ask Dusleys  what happened to Hedwig... :-)
Title: A Suspicious Gift 21 Sep 2008 11:41 pm
Reviewer: Doxie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this tale; please continue writing.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much, Mila

Title: A Suspicious Gift 21 Sep 2008 7:27 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Your story shows alot of promise, and I love the way that you have portrayed Snape. I can't believe that you had a complaint that Snape was too cross with the kids--that is a hundred percent Snapish reaction. Please keep him snarky.

    You're right - Sev is the ultimate disciplinarian, and I hate when he's portrayed as too mushy!

    Author's Response: Thank you. I will definitely try to keep him from mushy *shudders* If I ever slip, let me know. Mila
Title: A Suspicious Gift 21 Sep 2008 4:43 pm
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a really touching story so far and I'm looking forward to its continuation!
    Will Severus confide in Minerva, will he get a min healer for is son and will it be possible for him to help his son and acknowledge him?
    Please, go on writing!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I can't answer your questions - you would stop reading :-) Mila 

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