| Title: A Suspicious Gift
| 21 Sep 2008 3:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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::glares::
Is there a particular reason Snape is acting like a total bastard? ::raises eyebrows:: Simply curious, my dear.
Last chapter I thought he was going to punish the Dursleys. I know that Harry doesn't know he's his father but isn't that supposed to change? And how'll Harry react to the news?
Update soon.
Yours,
Lady Julie Snape.
Author's Response: Ah, you seem to be angry with me. Curious... I am going to punish the Dursleys, don't worry. *waves* Mila
Aww, poor Harry! I hope he will eventually tell Severus or Min about what really happened. It was funny when Sev made them leave and then come back in to greet them properly.
My dad made my little nephews do that one time when they came inside slamming doors and being really loud and ignoring him when he came to visit.
Manners are an important concept.
Post soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, Snapegirl! I had a complaint about Snape being too cross with the kids. But who is Severus if not a disciplinarian? Yay for your dad. Mila
This was wonderful! I always thought it would be difficult to convey emotion in a one shot, especially a shorter one, but you've done it beautifully. Thanks for sharing this. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
| Title: A Secret Gift
| 21 Aug 2008 7:12 am
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| Reviewer: SometimeSelkie (Anonymous)
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Short and sweet (except for the dead Hedwig part - I imagine Petunia eventually freaked out from the bird smell). How often does Severus spy on Harry, I wonder?
Author's Response: Thanks *waves* I think Severus keeps as closest eye on Harry as he can manage. Not an easy task to keep Harry safe! Mila
Awwwww....great story!
Author's Response: Thank you
Very touching and lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you, Mila
Very cool name for the owl and how sweet of Severus to give him that gift. I know nothing replaces the first pet you have that has died, but another one can comfort you and Harry needs that comfort, since his godfather is dead and so is Hedwig. I hope Severus punishes the Dursleys good! A great little story, I wish there was more to it!
I've added to my NA series, and I've got a new one too, Heir to Prince Manor, if you want to check them out!
Author's Response: Thank you *waves* A new Never Again story? I have to check it out! And the Heir too. Mila
Like your one shot but I want to find out more I want to see what Sev does to the Dursleys I want to see Sev taking care and helping Harry I want more...LOL
Good work
Author's Response: Thank you. I guess I should write more - I killed Hedwig without any explanation, after all. *guilty* Mila
Very nice job. You said a lot and conveyed a lot of emotion in a small space. As with all good one-shots like this, I wouldn't mind having the story continued at all. My one little nit-pic is that Harry has owned an owl for five years now. Why would Severus think he needed to look up how to care for it? If it is because the owl is a different species with slightly different needs than a Snowy Owl, I think that should be lightly indicated.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Actually, I was only trying to think up something sounding Snape-ish, heh. Only Snape would give you a gift with a barb about taking care for it. That's why he's my favourite character, I think. *waves* Mila
I really like what you've introduced here, and how Snape feels about his method of fixing the problem. I hope you're planning on writing more, because I'd love to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Snape's really something, isn't he? *grin* Thank you for your review, Mila
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