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Reviews For Harry Potter and His Three Godfathers
for example... -----"Moony you would really do that to me?" asked Sirius with a hurt expression on his face. "For Harry’s well being yes I would old friend. I would do anything to make Harry’s childhood much better than what I saw in those memories, even helping to raise Harry without you." Remus replied pointing to the pensieve.----- See... in this one Sirius ASKED and Remus REPLIED... both past tense. Then... -----Severus looks from Sirius’ outstretched hand up to the man’s face then over to Harry before he takes Sirius’ hand. "I will also do my best to put the past behind me where it belongs for little Harry’s sake." Severus confirms. ----- And now Severus LOOKS and CONFIRMS in present tense.... Author's Response: Thank you for pointing thaat out to me..........I had thought I caught them all but guess I missed a few. I hope you enjoyed the story even with my confusing the past with the present.
Author's Response: You will get your answer in the next chapter. *evil grin*
Author's Response: You will find out in the next chapter. I will try to update soon. The Devil made me leave it there. *giggles*
Author's Response: Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you and i will be updating soon.
Did you mean to go out of canon? I remember in the first book that Sirius arrived at the Potter's home just as Hagdrid got there. Hagdrid had Harry and Sirius wanted the baby. But Dumbledore had told H to bring the baby to him. It is okay though. Looking forward to Sirius finding that he and Remus and Severus will be raising little Harry Author's Response: Yes I did mean to go off canon. I guess I should have put that at the beginning of my story. I apologize for not doing so. In my story Sirius was on assignment until after Harry had been delivered to Dumbledore by Hagrid. When he heard that James and Lily were killed by Voldemort he assumed that little Harry was dead too and that is why he went after Pettigrew because he wanted revenge. There will definately be fireworks, but not telling anymore than that. ;) Thank you for reading and please keep reading.
Author's Response: Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you. I loved the old Keystone Cop movies so I used it when describing the scene. Yes it seems Remus has grown up and is ready to help Severus raise Harry. He realizes that to raise little Harry they are going to have to put their differences behind them but I am sure it is gonna take Sirius a little while to realize that but he gets an eye opening next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you and it will be quite a shock when Sirius get to Hogwarts. |
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