Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 3 14 May 2013 2:21 am
Reviewer: Sunstar989 (Signed) [Report This]
    Please finish this story. Please!!! I am begging on my knees right now. Is snape going to adopt the boys. Will Sirius be in this story. I can't wait. Please finish this story
Title: Chapter 3 06 Jan 2011 1:05 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really hope you get your muse back this is an amazing story and you write harry so well
Title: Chapter 3 20 Aug 2010 2:24 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I.Love.THIS.STORY.
    PLEASE continue!:)
    A little bit of advice:Maybe you could slow the story down a bit / I'm having trouble keeping up.
    But I still absoulutly adore this story!
    Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: The Strangest Birthday Ever 20 May 2010 7:28 pm
Reviewer: akari chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i cant wait for chapter 4 if there will be
Title: Chapter 3 23 Jan 2009 5:04 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    really like this story so far. was a bit confused when eithen got angry at severus about dealing with harry as an abused child but so far in the story both men have been very forceful with harry so eithen getting angry at that point is the opposite of how they've been acting...

    hope that made sense. the story is different in its own right as severus has a total personality change but i like where the story is heading. hope to see a new chapter soon

    kate

    Author's Response:

    i am sorry i confused you , yes they were forceful with harry , but Severus had not cause Harry to have a panic attack  all the other times that he had force harry to do something , that is the reason why Eithen blew up at Severus for causing harry's panic attack

     

Title: The Strangest Birthday Ever 11 Jan 2009 6:18 am
Reviewer: studiohq (Signed) [Report This]
    This is Promising I must read on!

    Author's Response: very glad you think so
Title: The Strangest Birthday Ever 06 Sep 2008 3:22 am
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    wat a fantastic chapter. i loved it and i really hope that the next chapter will be posted soon. 10/10 for this one! i am adding this story to my faves too

    Author's Response: thanks, I just have to finish typing chp. 3 then i can post it
Title: The Strangest Birthday Ever 01 Sep 2008 12:34 am
Reviewer: Huntresss (Signed) [Report This]
    this is quite excellent. I had read the beginning before but lost track of the story when i refound it last night. Keep up the good work.
    Is Harry ever going to come around and see Snape as more than the bad guy. I am pleased with your interaction between Him and Draco. He could really use a good friend.

    Author's Response: thank you for your review , i glad that you like the story chp.3 will be out soon hopefully
Title: The Meddling Potions Master 30 Aug 2008 2:24 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I like your story and I am curious where it will lead us. Just one little thing: please, go through it and correct commas (e.g.: "No more darring stuntsCOMMA PotterCOMMA till your fully recoveredCOMMA" he snapped as he picked the boy up gently and layed him back under the emerald green comforter. Oh, and there is a typo in "daring" and it should be "you're", not "your".) It degrades your otherwise very nice fanfic. No offence.

    Author's Response: thank you for the grammer corrections , i am glad you like the story
Title: The Strangest Birthday Ever 30 Aug 2008 4:02 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that was quite the long chapter! I like your story a lot, but there was so much to absorb in this chapter that it might have been easier if you made it into several chapters, such as the clothes store with Melissa & Declan as one or two and then the chapter with Eithan and maybe another with the panther familiar as well. You have some great ideas here and I really like them, but it'd be easier for people to read if you broke it up some. And there are a few spelling errors and punctuation too. I don't mean to be harsh, since I think this story could be excellent but it's best if you feed the reader in small doses, so they can get the full effect of all your wonderful ideas.

    Author's Response: thank you for the ideas, chp. 2 is so long because i had no idea where cut it off. chp. 3 will be a lot shorter hopefully if i don't get carried away again.

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