*sniffles*
You did this very well. And Harry's fear was more than tangible. I may have to go back and reread now.
wished you had of continued this
yeah, i figured out whom it was easily enough. good fic!
Ooooh I love Snape.... I love a gentle and sweet Snape...
I hate "The Man" and I loved your story! Thank you for wiriting this!
For some reason, people like to see Lockhart as a rapist...and I can actually see that happening, with the Memory Charms and all. But yes, Snape is Safe. Safe Snape. :)
Good story. I really liked the series of disconnected scenes approach you took.
Can't remember if I ever reviewed this before, but just wanted to say that it's a very good story. I always thought Lockhart was a perv.
I loved your Snape, by the way.
Good work!
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH You left it an open yet closed cliffy! Just enough to tie it neatly together yet not enough to truly satisfy the need and allow if you so chose to write more. Oh how I hope you right more. Really like this story. I would give it a 100 if I could!
Powerfully written. Emotionally gripping. You handled this sensitive topic extremely well--never becoming voyeuristic, yet giving us enough to empathize with poor Harry.
And Snape was in perfect character.
Well done!
May I murder the b******? I'm trying to be polite here... Darn... Now I'm going to have to write an obit for a character in my own story...
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